Ride Home From the Beach

05/09/2018
                
                a sea of salt sand
                populates swimsuit waistband
                the oceans wet itch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Giggles! Awesome :)
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May 10, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Delete? No, add. Mick want's entries to his contest dated. :)
Knowlton Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 11:55 AM
How do I delete the date?
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May 9, 2018 at 11:46 AM
Thanks Maureen. Got your email too.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Soup mailing you
Krutsinger Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 6:34 AM
I had to howl at this one. I am applauding you. This haiku is a "wow" for me.
Knowlton Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 6:36 AM
Hi Caren and thanks. Just wrote it for the Haiku contest.
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