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Rick Heart's warmth

            Through the darkest of nights with cold ice
            Yet remembering in my heart with warm love    

          A time in the Midwest an Irish French family of Seven 
         The fishing , boating and woods sent by Heaven 

          One night stands out that warms my Heart a frozen state      
         It was Winter having a Basketball Game to cheer at ..very late

          asking others too many times before for a ride
                          ~ here comes my pride ~

              calling many times only receiving a machine 
              standing by the only payphone , out of change
            It's now 3am calling collect , freezing my bones , the Scene

                I was giving up thinking.. shelter where to find ?
             snow falling hard, last call , my oldest brother answers

                 Never have I forgotten that frost bitten night 
              ~  through the frozen snow I see his headlights ~
 
            Rick driving his " Mach 1 "  Proud , Foghat playing loud 
           He my Hero like an Angel takes flight , certain he saved my life     
         ~ It was God whom sent him out in the cold freezing night ~
 
(   This is a poem entered in "Hearts Warmth " contest , also a true story of love 
     &   dedication to my oldest Brother  ) I always proud .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/10/2013 9:35:00 AM
This is so good! I enjoyed the nostalgic feel. I also loved that car when I was a kid.
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Shanity Rain
Date: 10/10/2013 3:59:00 PM
I can see you driving that car with the T-tops , his was a rust color. Then he found a classic Red Chevy Truck , with the truck & the car , my brother. The Star !
Date: 10/7/2013 6:59:00 PM
this is so sweet and gives our hearts warm fuzzies. WEll, I think I am now finished for the night. see you later!
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Date: 10/7/2013 11:58:00 PM
Thank- you Andrea , I always love your comments and I notice your wins ! Many love you , I as well !!
Date: 10/7/2013 2:11:00 PM
a delightful piece of writing really beautiful
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Date: 10/7/2013 11:57:00 PM
Thank-you Liam ~ as I go to sleep , you awaken !
Date: 10/6/2013 2:33:00 PM
Shanity, a well done poem.. touching dedication... thank you for sharing a piece of you...Linda
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Date: 10/6/2013 9:41:00 PM
Thank-you very much Linda! I just adore your comments and all you do to inspire others !
Date: 10/6/2013 2:07:00 PM
Your work is amazing and unique. I love your grand style. kudos! Thanks for your wonderful comments on my poem. I was really encouraged. Thanks. Love and hugs.
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Date: 10/6/2013 9:40:00 PM
Well you are welcome and Thank-you for reading ! Love , shanity ~
Date: 10/6/2013 1:48:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me.Enjoyed reading this work honoring by you honoring your brother..It is good to have family upon which to call in time of need and also when there is a time to just enjoy each other's company ...Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
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Date: 10/6/2013 9:39:00 PM
Thank-you Sara , I hope he reads it ! I always love the inspiration you have sponsoring contest , Love !!
Date: 10/6/2013 12:32:00 PM
A beautiful story, so well-written, Shanity Rain! A lovely tribute to your brother Rick :)
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Date: 10/7/2013 8:33:00 AM
In fairness add 20 yrs to that !! Hehe .
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Date: 10/6/2013 1:15:00 PM
Thank-you , Yes ..he is still my Hero and it is 30 yrs later !