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Richo the Happy Hummingbird

Richo the happy hummingbird Dancing merrily across the green lawn Waltzing in the gentle showers of the sprinkler Humming his joyful song One day he will return here to dance one more dance At that time he will bring another Giving his first shot at romance Richo the hummingbird scouts out the tender flowers Choosing which one he will drink from when he brings another Not wanting to blow his first big chance. Gwendolen Rix 7-19-14 Dedicated to the hummingbird in my friend's back yard in California...he entertains me for hours each day! Hummingbirds are a sign of God's mercy which is never-ending!

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Date: 7/29/2014 12:57:00 PM
this is a good one Rix,, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... Love Linda
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:26:00 PM
I see that I had commented to this one a while back and I noticed you started posting fairly regularly back in March. well, hey , girlfriend, how do you feel about taking up with me again on that clerihew project, I was so sad to put that dream away@!!
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Date: 7/27/2014 1:31:00 PM
How wonderful GR...congrats Tim
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Date: 7/27/2014 12:50:00 PM
very cute! grats on your win!
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Date: 7/27/2014 11:31:00 AM
Dear Gwen, so happy to be able to read your work again! Hope Richo finds the perfect flower for his date. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/27/2014 7:18:00 AM
Lovely write Rix ! Oh I love hummingbirds ,, cute n tender ,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/26/2014 9:55:00 PM
I love this, very cute and interesting write, G.R. congrats
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Date: 7/21/2014 8:41:00 PM
Hi Gwen, I remember you talking about hummingbirds once and am now happy to find you back to your old self,.. nice one, hope all is well with you.
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Date: 7/26/2014 2:02:00 PM
Hi Jaggy! Somethings never change!! Hope u and your entire family is doing great! I wonder how you all are getting along!
Date: 7/20/2014 12:11:00 AM
Dear Gwendolen: A lovely feeling of rapture and delight you have sculpted here with your word craft. Enjoyed this moment. Leon
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Date: 7/19/2014 10:41:00 PM
SO cute. Did you enter it into the animal story contest?
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