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Rhythms

Rhythms My heart beats in rhyme with the rhythm of the river, the restless rolling rhythm of time…

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Date: 1/28/2019 7:37:00 AM
Susan, a very pretty poem, I was swept away in the rhythm of your words ~
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/28/2019 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Dear Heart. Blessings, Susan
Date: 1/28/2019 4:54:00 AM
I like your "r's" in this alliteration, Susan. It rolls really regally off my rigid roll-eating tongue.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/28/2019 11:24:00 AM
Haha! Thank you Caren. That was a remarkable reply. Hugs, Susan

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