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Rhythm of a River

Nette Onclaud, Rolling with the R’s, 8/4/2025 Rhythm of a River rambling funny waters, downward rapidity of laughter on white water raft. unintended coxswain gets rogue-wave kissed. guides directing, this way and that, up and down; rowers with coarse correction, rambling.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 8/6/2025 10:09:00 PM

An exciting experience.Congrates on your win.

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/6/2025 3:51:00 PM

"unintended coxswain gets rogue-wave kissed." -- Yep, been there done that. Love it! Such a brilliant, fun read!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2025 1:24:00 PM

I see you got a win from the congrats on this. Well deserved, Kim!

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 8/6/2025 7:31:00 AM

A beautiful rambling indeed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2025 7:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kim :) - hugs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/6/2025 2:18:00 AM

Loved the title and the "downward rapidity of laughter." Must be enchanting to listen to. Thanks for sharing this lovely look at nature. Thank you also for your visit to my POTD.