Rhythm and Blues

To handle dreadful time, to cherish it
although I have no gall for such-
past the ennui of  night’s workload,
this jive which I embrace relentlessly
fizzles like soapsuds in my nails;
a voice quelled with the dirt of blue mood…
How lethargy chokes me, its tar roasting
my senses humid as air, more apt for birds,
that I  cruise along an alley where piano tunes
with acoustic strings invite a certain madness--
the scent of rhythm and blues perks
ached limbs, gradually tapping a free
movement pleading abandon…cheeks lighten,
enthralled by an opulence of notes;
till I scream, yes, time,  though you're a dreadful bane,
I will hold you wildly, once again.


1/6/2018
For Craig Cornish: Blue Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Nette congratulations - this is certainly a fav for me. A hearty, earthy wildly exiting write - simply beautiful! Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
Lawless Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 5:57 AM
TURN IT UP NETTE!!!!!!LOUDER.....LOUDER....SO ALL CAN HEAR AND SHARE THIS WONDROUS MELODY OF WORDS......
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January 11, 2019 at 9:55 PM
This Is So Good. A fave! Congratulations on your top win Nette! :)) xomo
Hamilton Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 8:57 PM
Great write Nette, congrats on a fine win!
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 7:52 PM
No wonder this is a winner!!! Not even sure this makes sense but “luscious” is the word I want to use. Congratulations!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 6:05 PM
This is remarkable nette. So glad to see you on top. Well done. Blessings, Janis
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 5:47 PM
This is fantastic Nette and very deserving of your First Placement in the Blue contest! Congratulations to you my friend! : ) xxoo
Parker Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 5:02 PM
congratulations nette, I really like this poem , well done
Sands Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:37 PM
Congratulations for your top win Nette :)
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:31 PM
many congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 2:26 PM
How my husband loved the blues! Very nicely penned, Nette. Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Datu Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 11:36 AM
The opposing themes of " blue" and how these affect your perception of time shows your impressive talent! A completely spellbinding piece of poetry.
Pandit Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 7:21 AM
A transformation from blue mood to opulence of rhythm and blue..music has that power. All the best, nette.
Smith Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 8:20 PM
Wow Nette, you dove deep with this one, best wishes in the contest...
Casto Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 5:25 PM
There's an energy, a kick from blue mood to rhythm and blues which makes you want to just beat something down. Impeccable poetry and for once, time defers to you....wham!
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