Rhythm and Blues

To handle dreadful time, to cherish it
although I have no gall for such-
past the ennui of  night’s workload,
this jive which I embrace relentlessly
fizzles like soapsuds in my nails;
a voice quelled with the dirt of blue mood…
How lethargy chokes me, its tar roasting
my senses humid as air, more apt for birds,
that I  cruise along an alley where piano tunes
with acoustic strings invite a certain madness--
the scent of rhythm and blues perks
ached limbs, gradually tapping a free
movement pleading abandon…cheeks lighten,
enthralled by an opulence of notes;
till I scream, yes, time,  though you're a dreadful bane,
I will hold you wildly, once again.


1/6/2018
For Craig Cornish: Blue Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/14/2019 8:55:00 AM
Nette congratulations - this is certainly a fav for me. A hearty, earthy wildly exiting write - simply beautiful! Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/12/2019 5:57:00 AM
TURN IT UP NETTE!!!!!!LOUDER.....LOUDER....SO ALL CAN HEAR AND SHARE THIS WONDROUS MELODY OF WORDS......
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Date: 1/11/2019 9:55:00 PM
This Is So Good. A fave! Congratulations on your top win Nette! :)) xomo
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Date: 1/11/2019 8:57:00 PM
Great write Nette, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 1/11/2019 7:52:00 PM
No wonder this is a winner!!! Not even sure this makes sense but “luscious” is the word I want to use. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/11/2019 6:05:00 PM
This is remarkable nette. So glad to see you on top. Well done. Blessings, Janis
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Date: 1/11/2019 5:47:00 PM
This is fantastic Nette and very deserving of your First Placement in the Blue contest! Congratulations to you my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/11/2019 5:02:00 PM
congratulations nette, I really like this poem , well done
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Date: 1/11/2019 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win Nette :)
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:31:00 PM
many congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2019 2:26:00 PM
How my husband loved the blues! Very nicely penned, Nette. Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/7/2019 11:36:00 AM
The opposing themes of " blue" and how these affect your perception of time shows your impressive talent! A completely spellbinding piece of poetry.
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Date: 1/7/2019 7:21:00 AM
A transformation from blue mood to opulence of rhythm and blue..music has that power. All the best, nette.
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Date: 1/6/2019 8:20:00 PM
Wow Nette, you dove deep with this one, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 1/6/2019 5:25:00 PM
There's an energy, a kick from blue mood to rhythm and blues which makes you want to just beat something down. Impeccable poetry and for once, time defers to you....wham!
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