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Internal rhymes: eef - ggf hhf, iij kkj llj, mmn, oon, ppn Rhyme end Scheme: aba cbc dbd

2 Reflection misdirection deceives it seems Trace surface tension back to source to grieve Reality thieves a setting sun, undone in dreams Be immersed, rehearse final act of faith Canonise, wash away lies with fact: believe Abstract still, fading will, appease wraith Coldness a bold move to disprove fate Closed eyes disguise hold gate to naive Visions aid indecision mold this tranquil state

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Date: 10/24/2024 9:15:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a very pretty picture. Wish I had this picture. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 10/24/2024 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Paula x
Date: 10/24/2024 6:39:00 AM
Dear DD, such a profound take on the picture and your use of rhymes are so unique and catchy! I love the way youv interpreted and woven lines with so much depth! I especially love the line “ Canonise, wash away lies with fact: believe” so uplifting and soul warming! Much needed! “ Closed eyes disguise hold gate to naive “ so much wisdom! I agree. Youv said so much in every line! In such a flawless rhythm! Pleasure reading your take on this! Sending you light always
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Date: 10/24/2024 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Ink, it all made sense this morning and I'm not so sure reading it now haha. Although that's why I post quickly as I go off whatever I've written if I hang onto it. Thank you for your kind words x

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