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Forgotten Time

Forgotten Time My mind conceals forgotten time...inside... I wander through its mist of discontent. It's there from life and love, I often hide; Though, lingering just leaves me reticent. Among these tangled webs, true love did stride; But, finding it again, I seem denied. 1.29.2017©deborah burch Rhyme

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Date: 2/3/2017 8:07:00 AM
Great touching poem Deborah, although I find the content difficult to believe if your expressive avatar is the true you.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 2/3/2017 2:35:00 PM
Thank you James!!:) yes that's truly me...
Date: 2/2/2017 7:04:00 PM
This was a very nice on, Deborah. Glad to see it now. I love the subject you covered.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 2/2/2017 7:13:00 PM
Thanks Andy. Glad to see you won with your fib!! Hugggs. Deb
Date: 2/1/2017 7:26:00 PM
Such heartfelt nostalgia felt in your emotional poem, Deborah. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/1/2017 2:53:00 PM
Hi Deborah, Excellent job! Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/1/2017 1:16:00 PM
Wonderfully spoken! Congrats, Deborah!
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:56:00 PM
This is EXCELLENT, Deb! 7+! Janice
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