Deborah Burch Poet Rhyme

Forgotten Time

Forgotten Time 

My mind conceals forgotten time...inside...
I wander through its mist of discontent. 
It's there from life and love, I often hide;
Though, lingering just leaves me reticent. 
Among these tangled webs, true love did stride;
But, finding it again, I seem denied. 


1.29.2017©deborah burch 


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James Inman February 3, 2017 at 8:07 AM Great touching poem Deborah, although I find the content difficult to believe if your expressive avatar is the true you. Deborah Burch February 3, 2017 at 2:35 PM Thank you James!!:) yes that's truly me...

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2017 at 7:04 PM This was a very nice on, Deborah. Glad to see it now. I love the subject you covered. Deborah Burch February 2, 2017 at 7:13 PM Thanks Andy. Glad to see you won with your fib!! Hugggs. Deb

Sandra Haight February 1, 2017 at 7:26 PM Such heartfelt nostalgia felt in your emotional poem, Deborah. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y. February 1, 2017 at 2:53 PM Hi Deborah, Excellent job! Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2017 at 1:16 PM Wonderfully spoken! Congrats, Deborah!

Janice Canerdy February 1, 2017 at 12:56 PM This is EXCELLENT, Deb! 7+! Janice