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Rhiannon, Celtic Goddess of the Moon

Rhiannon, Celtic Goddess of the Moon, with your silver hair
That flows for eternity as on your beautiful silver steed speed
Across the huge sky; you use your beauty__ men to snare
How you've lured men for centures and their minds ensnare

Rhiannon, Celtic Goddess of the Moon with flowing silver hair
Without a care on your beautiful silver steed ride on into eternity
Drawing all men, trap__luring to come and gaze with ease
Looking into the night sky they see your beauty as you ride by

Seemingly on your silver steed you rear up and stars
Flow into your trance and around your body they follow
Captivited by your beauty and magical pull into moon glow
How you have lured men for centures and them ensnared

Rhiannon, Celtic Goddess of the Moon, with your silver hair
That flows for eternity as on your beautiful silver steed speed

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James Fraser Date: 7/7/2010 2:03:00 PM Terrific capture of Rhiannon Sara, exceptional in fact. It's also a lovely name, and a beautiful song by Stevie Nicks >> James Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/7/2010 1:26:00 PM A nice personification of Rhiannon. Sara. Way to go lady. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Adell Foster Date: 7/7/2010 12:23:00 PM Sara, this is an awesome read, your well chosen words have brought the imagery to life for the readers, excellent figurative language throughtout. Best Wishes in the Contest ;-) God's Love, ALways, Adell Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/7/2010 4:11:00 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Sara. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 7/7/2010 1:49:00 AM Hi Sara, very impressive personification, what a lovely picture of the Celtic Goddess of the Moon!!! Enjoyed reading it this morning. Yes, they believed that Exypéry was shot down during WW II by a German fighter plane, but also engine trouble could have caused his death...Thank you for yor kind comment on Night Flight and have a nice day...Gert Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/6/2010 6:56:00 PM Hey, not THAT'S personification, Sara!! I can picture her in the sky, with one of those constellations like they describe in books with stars forming around her beautiful form. Luv, andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/6/2010 6:15:00 PM This is certainly a powerful entry for Dr. Ram's contest.. good luck in the contest.. now please. ... do this.. drink plenty of water.. force yourself if u have to but get it down.. AND.. cranberry juice .. straight.. not mixed with apples or grape just plain cranberry juice.. it does wonders for the kidneys.. clears infections as well as prevents them too.. and liquids are super important .. just as prayers.. so for every glass of water or juice u drink a prayer will be sent to God to bless u. Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 7/6/2010 5:46:00 PM She is beautiful, no doubt. Vince Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/6/2010 3:27:00 PM You have a winner here I am sure. Great work. Thank you fro your comments. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/6/2010 1:38:00 PM Really enjoyed your informative piece tonight Sara, tc Wilma Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/6/2010 1:19:00 PM Perhaps this Rhiannon was the inspiration for the song by the same title by Fleetwood Mac. Enjoy learning about history and cultural legends. Good work, Sara! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply