Rhapsody

Bird of song, you trill Fine tunes that refill; a piping of serenade upon bright treetops… while I, in awe, stop along dewy bend of glade. Glum near a mountain from a heartbreak’s strain, till wings of rhapsody bring an awakened flight… Lo! My breaths delight in your dawn-chant of healing! Dr.Ram's Alouette Contest by nette onclaud
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Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Wonderfully penned, Nette. I think yours is one of the best. Congrats for your win.
Nance Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Beautiful dawn-chant of healing! :) love that line. grats on your win sweetie
Chutani Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 10:24 PM
lovely rhapsody and healing through nature, Nette. congrats. Mohan
Gibson Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 6:31 PM
Lovely, Nette....favorite line "along dewy bend of glade." Congratulations.
Richards Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 10:14 AM
This poem sails on wings....and takes us with it ! Lovely once again !!
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 8:02 AM
stunning imagery as ever nette many congratulations on this wonderful poem:-) Hugs jan xxx
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Thanks for the entry and my congrats on your 2nd Place win, nette
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 1:50 PM
there is nothing more harmonic than songs of birds. You did a darn good job of stereophonically bringing the grooves to our ears here. ANd to answer your question>No Neete you are nothing like the Black white girl I dated, Her soul was black, though many thought I was being racist or something...who knows. I know my intention. I am fortunate to have you reading my poems and to be able to hear yours. Please do keep corresponding with me on our journey through creativity....Thank you sooo much!
Horne Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 3:03 PM
love this inspiring write, my friend x
Carroll Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:03 PM
A truly uplifting write Nette!
Sumler Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 4:50 PM
This poem itself is a beautiful serenade of verse and imagery. You really painted this poetic artwork...amazing write!
Smith Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 3:54 PM
A lovely serenade nette...hugs Tim
Gonza Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Whoa, you pulled this one with such ease and grace. Today, you are my melody, Nette
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your very descriptive and expressive work..If for a contest reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 8:49 AM
Wow love this one Nette ! Awakened flight to breaths delight,, enchanting powerful words there!
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 8:46 AM
that is one fine rhapsody. I love hearing them sing, Nette. This looks like maybe for some challenge here at Soup? I will have to go see!!
Manassian Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 8:32 AM
One of your sweetest, Nette. You are a powerful poetess. I'm enthralled
Lamoureux Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 7:29 AM
There is indeed healing that comes from emearsing ourselves in nature. Well expressed Nette.
Sabre Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Sublime melody from your pen that spills rebirth and glory. Thank you again Nette for believing in me.
Allison Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 5:55 AM
Loved this from start to finish I can hear the birdsong in my head and happiness being restored to my life Nette. Hugs Jan xxx
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