Rhapsody

Bird of song, you trill Fine tunes that refill; a piping of serenade upon bright treetops… while I, in awe, stop along dewy bend of glade. Glum near a mountain from a heartbreak’s strain, till wings of rhapsody bring an awakened flight… Lo! My breaths delight in your dawn-chant of healing! Dr.Ram's Alouette Contest by nette onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2014 1:00:00 PM

Wonderfully penned, Nette. I think yours is one of the best. Congrats for your win.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/23/2014 7:49:00 AM

Beautiful dawn-chant of healing! :) love that line. grats on your win sweetie

Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/22/2014 10:24:00 PM

lovely rhapsody and healing through nature, Nette. congrats. Mohan

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/22/2014 6:31:00 PM

Lovely, Nette....favorite line "along dewy bend of glade." Congratulations.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/22/2014 10:14:00 AM

This poem sails on wings....and takes us with it ! Lovely once again !!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2014 8:02:00 AM

stunning imagery as ever nette many congratulations on this wonderful poem:-) Hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/22/2014 6:01:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and my congrats on your 2nd Place win, nette

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/1/2014 1:50:00 PM

there is nothing more harmonic than songs of birds. You did a darn good job of stereophonically bringing the grooves to our ears here. ANd to answer your question>No Neete you are nothing like the Black white girl I dated, Her soul was black, though many thought I was being racist or something...who knows. I know my intention. I am fortunate to have you reading my poems and to be able to hear yours. Please do keep corresponding with me on our journey through creativity....Thank you sooo much!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/18/2014 3:03:00 PM

love this inspiring write, my friend x

Ken Carroll

Date: 7/18/2014 2:03:00 PM

A truly uplifting write Nette!

Johnny Sumler

Date: 7/17/2014 4:50:00 PM

This poem itself is a beautiful serenade of verse and imagery. You really painted this poetic artwork...amazing write!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/17/2014 3:54:00 PM

A lovely serenade nette...hugs Tim

Franco Gonza

Date: 7/17/2014 12:36:00 PM

Whoa, you pulled this one with such ease and grace. Today, you are my melody, Nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2014 11:00:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your very descriptive and expressive work..If for a contest reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/17/2014 8:49:00 AM

Wow love this one Nette ! Awakened flight to breaths delight,, enchanting powerful words there!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2014 8:46:00 AM

that is one fine rhapsody. I love hearing them sing, Nette. This looks like maybe for some challenge here at Soup? I will have to go see!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/17/2014 8:32:00 AM

One of your sweetest, Nette. You are a powerful poetess. I'm enthralled

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/17/2014 7:29:00 AM

There is indeed healing that comes from emearsing ourselves in nature. Well expressed Nette.

Gabby Sabre

Date: 7/17/2014 6:23:00 AM

Sublime melody from your pen that spills rebirth and glory. Thank you again Nette for believing in me.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/17/2014 5:55:00 AM

Loved this from start to finish I can hear the birdsong in my head and happiness being restored to my life Nette. Hugs Jan xxx