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Rhapsodies of Nature

RHAPSODIES of NATURE ************ Rhapsody of the deep oceans, Fathomless abysses, soft music flows. Quietus, in respect of all the dead. Eternity defines these dark depths. Story? As yet, waiting to be read. Rhapsody of the earths atmosphere Fathomless thoughts abound up there Quietus, debt paid freedom rules Eternity where lies should not exist. Story? Hark, birds sing migrating. Rhapsody of planet Earth, thunder! Fathomless violence, countries at war! Quietus, unnecessary death rules! Eternity where, look up to the sky. Story? For mans mistakes nature cry's! *****************
___________________________________ Five Words, Please - Poetry Contest - Sponsored by Broken Wings 3/17/18

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Date: 4/9/2018 11:08:00 PM
Awesome poem, Mick. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/2/2018 6:14:00 PM
Mick, congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative and powerful write, as a lover of nature too I fear for the future . . .
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Date: 3/31/2018 7:52:00 PM
A thought provoking and words to take seriously. What a great way to use the required words. Well done Mick!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/1/2018 1:40:00 AM
Many thank yous Carrie, appreciated... Mick
Date: 3/17/2018 5:56:00 PM
Sadly no let up, man continues on his path of wanton destruction of our beautiful planet. Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/1/2018 1:36:00 AM
Sadly is the word Tom, sorry for the late reply... Mick
Date: 3/17/2018 12:25:00 PM
I love the way you've used the required words as the first word of each stanza, the final stanza packs a punch Mick , no wonder the earth cries when it sees the devastation caused by man:-(hugs jan xx
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/17/2018 1:15:00 PM
Thanks Jan! Its a sorry fact though, so, so, sad!

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