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Rewrite the Stars Senyru

Rewrite the Stars…..Rhymed Senryu 5/31/2025 Be the enchantress, Drive them to loving madness, Watch the moon undress.

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John Read

Date: 6/17/2025 8:41:00 AM

There's nothing more enticing than a naked moon.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/2/2025 3:32:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, I enjoyed this creative poem you have writte4n. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2025 10:56:00 AM

Hello Panagiot6a, I am hoping to have thie dream again. Without the fog. then i would know who the person is. thaqnk you. Hugs. /Darlene/

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/2/2025 4:50:00 PM

Heep Darle, thank you. May you feel fine and find the ysfreious mam in your dreams! Hugs, Pangie

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/2/2025 1:53:00 AM

That was beautifully done. Poetic hugs.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/2/2025 10:26:00 AM

Victor, hi and thank you. So much. I have been feeling well lately and I’m not reading much forward or writing is either.. Hugs, Pangie

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/1/2025 12:47:00 PM

Admirable freedom dear friend. :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/1/2025 1:30:00 PM

Indeed! The more I read it, the more aspects of life glow and blind me!))) Wishing you a good week! Pangie, thank you…

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/31/2025 8:19:00 PM

Whoa. I just got mooned. lol. Nice write, P. ~ gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/31/2025 9:15:00 PM

Funny, G! Mooned requires specifics of the soul. I wasnt using comedy here, but, you are a master at it! Congratulations, nice to sea you. Thanks Pangie, the Pisces!

Elena Eagle

Date: 5/31/2025 5:27:00 PM

A well written poem for sure. Very romantic with a beautiful melody.

Kenneth MATTOON

Date: 5/31/2025 4:19:00 PM

you write beautifully,

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/31/2025 4:29:00 PM

You are a sweetheart, Kenneth…Hope all is going well for you. Thank you, Pangie