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Rewrite the Stars Senyru

Rewrite the Stars…..Rhymed Senryu 5/31/2025 Be the enchantress, Drive them to loving madness, Watch the moon undress.

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Date: 6/17/2025 8:41:00 AM
There's nothing more enticing than a naked moon.
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Date: 6/2/2025 3:32:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, I enjoyed this creative poem you have writte4n. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2025 10:56:00 AM
Hello Panagiot6a, I am hoping to have thie dream again. Without the fog. then i would know who the person is. thaqnk you. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/2/2025 4:50:00 PM
Heep Darle, thank you. May you feel fine and find the ysfreious mam in your dreams! Hugs, Pangie
Date: 6/2/2025 1:53:00 AM
That was beautifully done. Poetic hugs.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/2/2025 10:26:00 AM
Victor, hi and thank you. So much. I have been feeling well lately and I’m not reading much forward or writing is either.. Hugs, Pangie
Date: 6/1/2025 12:47:00 PM
Admirable freedom dear friend. :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/1/2025 1:30:00 PM
Indeed! The more I read it, the more aspects of life glow and blind me!))) Wishing you a good week! Pangie, thank you…
Date: 5/31/2025 8:19:00 PM
Whoa. I just got mooned. lol. Nice write, P. ~ gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/31/2025 9:15:00 PM
Funny, G! Mooned requires specifics of the soul. I wasnt using comedy here, but, you are a master at it! Congratulations, nice to sea you. Thanks Pangie, the Pisces!
Date: 5/31/2025 5:27:00 PM
A well written poem for sure. Very romantic with a beautiful melody.
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Date: 5/31/2025 4:19:00 PM
you write beautifully,
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/31/2025 4:29:00 PM
You are a sweetheart, Kenneth…Hope all is going well for you. Thank you, Pangie

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