Rewrite the Stars-Senryu

Be the enchantress, Drive them to loving madness, Watch the moon undress. Rhymed Senryu July 21, 2021

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2021 3:44:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, this souds wonderful. Enjoyed the read. Hugs xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2021 6:27:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, yes I enjoyed this poem. Yes it leaves the reader to draw to their own. Hugs xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2021 4:34:00 PM

So, so glad you enoted this. It leaves each reder to draw their own picture)) Pangie xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/21/2021 1:34:00 PM

A sight I'd love to see. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2021 2:06:00 PM

Hi dear Tom, hope weather OK in the UK! What a sight to see...leave it to your imagination Pangie xx

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/21/2021 12:03:00 PM

It won't go unnoticed, cameras everywhere these days. Very sexy, enchanting write -- Al Naturale can be quite beautiful. Blessings my friend!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2021 2:03:00 PM

Prince de Mino! Hi, there. ROFLMAO.. Cameras! So true. There is a sensuality in this write but very quiet Thank you for saying it was beautiful. Each poet can read into it as they choose. Greets to you and Ila....PaNgiE xxoo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/21/2021 11:20:00 AM

Delightful Pangie! Wonderful image of the moon undressing! Blessings!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2021 1:58:00 PM

Greetings Sam. Glad you liked. The moon undressing.. I have no idea where that came from but I thought it was cool. I also centered the Poem. I do know Senryus are not meant to be written like that, 'twas my artistic choice! Merci, Pangie xxoo