Revive a Revised Revision

Revise A Revised Revision or the Three Rs Who would want to be fooled by a phony fake? Before heart will break, another version make, And while at it remove each excessive word Wherever and when they all had occurred. He could care less about being intelligent; Thought that everything was irrelevant And after he had heard someone call, He never tried to listen to anyone at all. He utterly was inclined to have an urge; Spent all of his money when he would splurge And of some sense never gained a grain; Expelled when actions were hard to explain. Each time was haunted over hill he vaunted; Taunted by waves and was a surfer undaunted; Easily swayed and person who was well fed; Turned fat, went to bed then ended up dead. PS. While I became a poet who was well read. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran