Revising For Exams

Distorted buildings where the wind men walk,
I asked myself what i thought, i couldn't say,
My frustration had driven all light from the day,
All heat from the garden,
And all dust from the shelf.
I was bare of thought
I ate repetition for breakfast lunch and tea,

It was a morning so crisp
When i wrote my first list-
to change the world.... but i couldn't, 
So i sat and i curled.
I drew triangles across lines and lines,
I wrote stories, songs and rhymes.
I fell, i slept, i was helpless, i wept.

I had no gut, and i had no name,
I watched the wasp die till no life did remain,
and i only felt empty, and i only felt cold, 
i grew that day, the day i became old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Agustin Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 11:07 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 31, 2016 at 8:46 PM
JESS, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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