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A cry for forgiveness!

With you, life has given me an advantage I've played with the switch and misused the voltage I've made our connection susceptible to cancer and created more questions, difficult to answer I've landed us in a place of unpleasant temperatures redemption then creates a schedule of difficult chores my recent undoing proves to be a terrible sting I'm also a casualty, broken is my wing I threw the punch but suffer a rout emotionally paralyzed from my own knockout action so wrong, highly glorifying a near miss my lips, coated with green herbs for a wrong kiss love and respect have dropped from being champions how would the eye shed tears from uncut onions? you have every right, but don't be in a haste judging me only gives my existence bad taste your closed heart already suffocates my future please smile at me, I need the suture your increasing distance, greatly adds to my loses my heart is morbid, in need of a hundred nurses our inseparable souls no longer stay as peers thank God, your virtue remains unchanged but fierce our solid foundation has gone a little watery and the tasty rapport becoming peppery my feelings are itchy to put the body in shock regret chews me gradually with a sharp fork in such tension, my honesty is rendered a scammer staying blind, you focus only on my hammer I do not demand a comeback with wonderful fireworks or a big embrace, worth of a million bucks I beg to suffer your wrong and have an equalizer my soul just can't rest, you alone know its tranquilizer my love for you is refined, there's no counterfeit the history of our affection, please don't forfeit a slight fall does not end the marathon a prick is the worst, inflicted by the thorn my clock has stopped, I've remained in one station call me friend again and save me from this cruel emotion outside your love, I remain a pathetic refugee please my love, forgive me and unhide the energy just to hold my hand again, anything I'll do and a thousand times, I'll flood your soul with "I love you".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/3/2019 1:50:00 AM
Moved me!!
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Date: 10/23/2019 2:59:00 PM
Wow! Powerful poetry, Funom. Love the title and sub-title. Grand emotion write, my dear friend. Love and more love always.
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Date: 10/21/2019 11:27:00 PM
An amazing powerful poem, love this, Funom
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:26:00 PM
Lots of really interesting comparisons and metaphors here, funom. I can see you put a lot of work into this. good to see you again!
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