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Reverie of Roses

when last rays of autumn - tip toe along to sunset streaked reveries listen to the crisp breeze of fallen fairies - truth floats through tawny tunes whilst crickets chirp - lulling grieving trees - silhouette of sky bursts in gold a crumpled haven of seraphic swings - whistling wind-swept dreams of brown as twilight bleeds merlot red runes - shifting shades of coral pink clouds weep flurry flakes curve - amidst a deep labyrinth of chamomile silence butterflies rest upon rain rinsed roses - exhaling brisk balmy blues timeless tales of forgotten tulips - yet between dusk and dawn faith thrives and frost-kissed hope - swiftly turns a new leaf - feathered with crystal belief but - if to love your moon is madness - let stars fade into cosmic dust

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 11/14/2023 4:26:00 AM

Good Morning Ink Empress. Oh My Goodness you are a most beautiful poetess who executes expressions and imagery with the true meaning of poetry where your skill entries are dressed in true vintage fashion. It is always an honor turning to your page because I am the better for it as any reader would be. Thank you for sharing your expertise. This is an entry to be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Have a beautiful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/8/2023 3:15:00 PM

Back with hearty congratulations on a well-deserved contest win, dear Ink. Best wishes for you all the time

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/8/2023 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win, Dear Poetess. Wow! Your chain of Monokus with exquisite descriptive images are simply stunning!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/8/2023 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Reverie Of Roses" is a lovely write/story told in a Monoku style. Love It... Enjoy your day/win writing away........

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/5/2023 6:04:00 PM

The last two lines are stunning Inky...you are the magic in the mind. :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/30/2023 11:32:00 PM

I must say that this is one of my most fav poems from you! Sequined with magical visions, impeccable imageries and resplendent colours, gosh, this made my heart skip many beats ~ I'm swooning over the mystical cadence that it created, almost can be recited like a love-filled spell.. So charismatic!!! "tip toe along to sunset streaked reveries", "listen to the crisp breeze of fallen fairies - truth floats through tawny tunes" How you've used alliteration too, within these stunning monoku poems!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/30/2023 11:34:00 PM

"a crumpled haven of seraphic swings - whistling wind-swept dreams of brown", "flurry flakes ", "chamomile silence" Ah, and all those colours, seriously glorious! I am now realising that I'm quoting the whole poem here, lol! "butterflies rest upon rain rinsed roses -" Bless me more with your spellbinding words!! This is honestly a masterpiece poem, whole of this is my Favorite! And that ending line.. Made me go wow! There couldn't have been a better finale than that for this poem..

Christian Alexander

Date: 10/30/2023 7:05:00 PM

Rad, love it. Your use of descriptive words so captivating. Thank you

Ink Empress
Date: 10/31/2023 11:05:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind feedback truly grateful

Paige Hind

Date: 10/30/2023 6:14:00 PM

Loved so many lines in this. Just whoah, lol. :)

Ink Empress
Date: 10/31/2023 11:05:00 PM

Awwn thank you so much

Jim Slaughter

Date: 10/30/2023 10:55:00 AM

Lots of wonderfully colorful imagery here, I E.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/31/2023 11:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind feedback truly grateful

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/30/2023 9:56:00 AM

These magnificent lines are so imagery rich and exquisitely lovely, Ink. Reading them was a great pleasure. Best wishes.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/31/2023 11:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for your best wishes and your feedback truly grateful

Sabrina Millicent

Date: 10/29/2023 11:28:00 PM

You have painted such beautiful imagery with your pen. My favourites are the butterflies and twilight lines I can just view the images so clearly. Your metaphors are simply fantastic.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/30/2023 3:28:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your visit and encouraging feedback truly grateful for kind thoughts like yours! Stay blessed

Juliet Ligon

Date: 10/29/2023 10:32:00 PM

Gorgeous string of monokus. Everything flows together so well.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/30/2023 3:29:00 AM

Ah thank you so much truly, grateful for your support

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/29/2023 6:50:00 PM

Dear Ink, the images you paint with your words are beyond breathtaking. You take me on a magical journey of rediscovery, of each and every season. This is my favorite line: "butterflies rest upon rain rinsed roses." So elegant and graceful, indeed. Your thoughts bring a smile, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Ink Empress
Date: 10/30/2023 3:29:00 AM

Ah Brandy, this is so very kind of your and so sweet of you to leave such soul warming thoughts on my poem, truly my heart is full! And im smiling! Appreciate you so much

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/29/2023 10:56:00 AM

chamomile silence, I'll drink to that, utterly splendidly portrayed my friend. Words you can be proud of ! :)

Ink Empress
Date: 10/30/2023 3:34:00 AM

Awwn thank you sweet rose, so kind of you: haha. Chamomile silence yes. Always am grateful for your encouraging visits

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/29/2023 8:56:00 AM

Splendid Monoku, all are worth remembering. Such visions of beauty are everywhere. You did fine. Blessings.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/30/2023 3:34:00 AM

Thank you so much alwaysss

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/29/2023 7:46:00 AM

Dear Ink, This poem is a work of art, replete with vivid details that are almost too many to list. The magical changes of fall are captured well, creating an invigorating mood. The poem's alliteration and the vivid imagery combined to make an indelible and colorful impact on my memory. Reading your poetry is an absolute pleasure; you have an incredible skill. Your ideas are conveyed with ease by the interwoven monoku verse, which flows into one another to form a beautiful whole, A fave for sure.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/30/2023 3:42:00 AM

Dear Sotto i always am grateful for your consistent support and kindness, thank you so very much for your visit and such thoughtful feedback and also fave.

Silent One

Date: 10/29/2023 5:49:00 AM

Now these are amazing monokus... you have really out done yourself with these.. each one with their own unique imagery and an excellent use of vocabulary..You create vivid imagery in each one... and it takes the reader on a lovely, pleasant journey descripting the image of autumn.. My favourite is, flurry flakes curve - amidst a deep labyrinth of chamomile silence

Ink Empress
Date: 10/31/2023 11:01:00 PM

Awn this means so much to me silent one, coming from you its such an honor! Thank you so very much always for your sincere and selfless support

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/29/2023 5:30:00 AM

when last rays of autumn - tip toe along to sunset streaked reveries listen to the crisp breeze of fallen fairies - truth floats through tawny tunes whilst crickets chirp - lulling grieving trees - silhouette of sky bursts in gold---awesome imagery throughout my friend. Your poem flows seamlessly through linked Monoku poems to deliver your theme cohesively. Simply beautiful!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/31/2023 11:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay always for your generous and sincere support, truly grateful always for your poetic presence and encouraging feedback always

Karen Jones

Date: 10/29/2023 12:16:00 AM

butterflies rest upon rain rinsed roses, exhaling brisk balmy blues.. Breath taking beautiful alliteration marrying imagery and birthing colorful tattoos on my brain. Your poetic genius has no limits. It is quite a treat to read your work. Thanks for sharing this fav!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/31/2023 11:02:00 PM

Thank you always karen for your kind and generous support, im truly grateful . That you take time to read and leave your sincere thoughts

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 10/29/2023 12:01:00 AM

Oooooo papi look at that opening line …. when last rays of autumn, tip toe along to sunset streaked reveries.. gorgeous!!! silhouette of sky bursts in gold..ooooo dayum!!! That imagery!! twilight bleeds merlot red runes,deep labyrinth of chamomile silence.butterflies rest upon rain rinsed rose…obsessed with the way this piece is crafted … I’m a sucker for just intricate descriptions!!! Ooo n that ending ! but, if to love your moon, is madness, let stars fade, into cosmic dust.. *melting**

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/28/2023 11:04:00 PM

Poem brings to life the changes of autumn. It's cool. I need to find my coat.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/31/2023 11:03:00 PM

Thank you so much awwn

Michelle Dosanjh-Johal

Date: 10/28/2023 10:39:00 PM

Wow, you are the queen of imagery and truly the mistress of captivating ink. There is so much beauty captured here, and too many lines to recount. My favorite two lines, "when the last days of autumn tip toe along to sunset streaked reveries".... "and frost kissed hope swiftly turns a new leaf..." Bravo

Ink Empress
Date: 10/31/2023 11:03:00 PM

Thank you so much always for your kind and generous support my warrior poetess! Your poetic presence means so much to me

Fading Star Silence

Date: 10/28/2023 9:50:00 PM

And as always, your poetry hits me deep in my gut..stirring this soul of mine, my beautiful soul sis! I’m swimming in the imagery of a crisp autumn air, such ethereal vibes with melancholic feels in the romanticism of fall scents that linger, speaks volumes here! Your words truly come alive with each line felt and read, I’m reeling in your brilliance here!