Paloma P Poet Free verse

Revelation's Optical Illusion

Quintessentially phantasmagoric,
  her cobalt skies' chimerical fancy
     whores itself out for poetry, 
sumptuously cached 'tween 
    a revelation's optical illusion
enchanting white knights 
     and seducing dragons alike,
her flimflam elusively lofty
 & difficult to evermore be captured
    amidst celestial spheres of rapture

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Lim'Rik Flats November 2, 2016 at 10:22 PM ...and what are we if not whores in the employ of madame reaper dying surreptitiously to self as we buy, sell, and trade one another determining a market value we call fair while laughing at the lie with our tears. Sorry, that fell outta my files — your words are much more amazing, amusing and awsomaniacal. I like peekin' in your PO closet:-) cheerupkas and chitlins! ~ j

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 12, 2016 at 4:41 AM An optical illusion indeed LOL! Good job here Paloma! MC

Robert Warlov October 9, 2016 at 6:57 PM I've always found dragons to be enchanting. It's the seductive white knights that spell trouble. - Easily the most chimerical definition for "BS" I've ever seen. ;~)

Daniel Turner October 7, 2016 at 8:48 AM I suppose I'm a rather cheap whore, when it comes to poetry. Nicely penned, Paloma! Left me smiling:) Paloma P October 7, 2016 at 9:08 AM Oh God, I actually did laugh out loud, left me smirking. :) Thanks for lifting my day!

Joseph P. DiMino October 7, 2016 at 7:12 AM Delightful, talented write! So rapturous! And if one is to whore, for most of do in one form or another, just some more honest than others--what better reason than glorious poetry?! Paloma P October 7, 2016 at 8:04 AM It is quite glorious, isn't it? I so appreciate your sentiment, thank you Joe!

Poet Destroyer A October 7, 2016 at 5:51 AM Yes, yes, well expressed. ;) she seems to capture the moment. Linda Paloma P October 7, 2016 at 8:03 AM Hopefully, thanks Linda. ;)

Richard Lamoureux October 6, 2016 at 11:56 PM This is quite well written! Bravo. Paloma P October 7, 2016 at 8:02 AM Thank you so much!