Retreat on a serene island

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Quiet island breeze, palms sway, gently swing, waves kiss shores, Seagulls soar around, paradise restores, Clouds dance, island dreams unfold, Serene island, tranquil sanctuary awaits #3 Verse

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2024 8:27:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Wish I was there... Have a great day writing away.................

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2024 5:40:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned

Valsa George

Date: 7/17/2024 11:26:00 PM

Congratulations dear friend on your first place win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2024 5:18:00 PM

Oh when we are in its midst but still we are usually tourists, not the workers. Love the imagery! Congrats!

Valsa George

Date: 7/14/2024 7:48:00 PM

Lovely description quite in keeping with the image. Indeed a place of peace and serenity. All the Best !

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/13/2024 12:02:00 PM

Hello Jay Narain, this poem seems to be peaceful. A place to relax. Enjoy your weekend. My friend. /Darlene/

Daisy Meadows

Date: 7/13/2024 11:18:00 AM

A lovely poem and picture. Well done.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/13/2024 11:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful island write. "Good Luck" Looks like we are on the same island/write. I love this picture. Wish I was there for real. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................