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Retreat

When the weather’s as hot as a marshmallow roast Or the orangey wires that turn bread into toast Then the person who will be complaining the most Is – you guessed it – uncomfortable me. For the heat makes me sluggish and ughish and such And when skin gets all sweaty and slimy to touch I won’t venture beyond my own walls very much Where I relish the humming A/C. There are those who do well in the 90-plus heat But I’ve learned, through the years, to acknowledge defeat. When the mercury’s up, home becomes my retreat And there’s no place that I’d rather be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/1/2019 10:05:00 PM
I like the heat; I sit out on the porch and soak it up because my husband keeps the house like a freezer, Ilene. I cannot relate at all, but it is a lovely poem!
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Date: 7/30/2019 4:57:00 PM
Sing it sista'. Me and heat and humidity. A vinyl seat? No, not for me. :) I look outside and start to sweat. Inside? Yeah, you bet. :)
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Date: 7/30/2019 4:44:00 PM
Oh, Ilene, I couldn't agree with you more! I live in Florida and I rarely leave the house in the summer. I am not a summer person! Great poem! Kim M.
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Date: 7/30/2019 1:26:00 PM
Have you ever been to Israel? There was a blizzard when I visited!! You describe well the hot summer in NYC! Hope the heat wave breaks soon! B'Shalom Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/29/2019 6:46:00 PM
I too am not good with the heat ilene, we have had high temperatures for us recently around 75 degrees but son has suffered in the Uk where the temperature reached about 102... i would be melting!!!Hugs jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 7/29/2019 6:49:00 PM
I've been reading about those high temps in Europe and feel bad for anyone on vacation there (as well as the people who live there, of course!)
Date: 7/29/2019 5:52:00 PM
Home is where the A/C is? What happened to the "r" in heart? Aloha! Rico
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 7/29/2019 6:40:00 PM
Ha! Very funny, Rico! I guess you're used to the heat living in Hawaii, but on the rare days it's really hot here (and humid), I totally wilt...

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