Notes About The Poem

Dance knows no borders – it brings people together regardless of religion, nationality, sexuality and political persuasion
- Sergei Polunin


 

Retired

Throw me high, higher still
Let me breathe again, 
Let me gain
height, I will
Live, smile, laugh, be filled
                      With heartbeats steady and wild
                      Let me move, relevé lent (1)
                      Let me stand
                      Hold my hand
                      As if I were a child
          Be my supporting leg (2)
          Be my heart when it fails
          Beat it for me, it's too frail
          Throw me high, I beg
          Pirouette me like a sail
                                  Dancing in the wind
                                  Retire (3) when I retire
                                  Be me, be my ire
                                  Be my eyes when I am blind
                                  Be my anger while I am kind
                Sit with me, this music
                Kneel by me, don't mourn
                For I felt airborne
                For one second, one tick
                Alive, in your arms reborn


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September 30, 2017
Copyright © Darren White







(1) Relevé lent is a classical ballet term meaning “slow raising.” It is usually used in the Russian Schools of ballet. It describes when a dancer starts in one of the basic ballet positions of the feet with straight legs, then lifts one leg off the floor while raising up to relevé on the supporting leg.

(2) Supporting leg is a classical ballet term that describes a dancer’s leg that is supporting their whole body while the other leg is free to do another step. A dancer’s supporting leg is often called a “standing leg.”

(3) Retire is the position in which a ballet dancer raises their thigh with the knee bent so that the pointed foot is placed either in front, behind or to the side of the supporting foot.
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May Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 8:55 AM
This is a beautiful write Darren...well penned
White Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:41 AM
Thank you Joseph, much appreciated :)
Vaso Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 11:38 PM
I am at a loss for words................. and you know amazing poem!!
White Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 12:21 AM
Thanks my friend, dancing is still my No.1 love :)
Cresswell Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 12:48 PM
Once again I watch and read to see the body made of words leap for the air, leap from the page and hold each other suspended between heaven and earth.
White Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 12:51 PM
I love it how you come back to poems for a second read <3
Ella Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Your poem dances, it is so alive, a beautiful poem <3
White Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Thanks my friend :)
Ricci Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:25 AM
I just had to say I have been energized with this entry. Thank you for that.
White Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:36 AM
You make me smile :)
Ricci Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:23 AM
Good Afternoon Darren - Allow me to say this entry needs no footnotes. Let me repeat that once again. This entry needs no footnotes. The emotive factor is off the charts with expression and feeling. Yes it is. This entry in format alone is Free Verse at its finest and best. Yes it is. I consider myself to be a better reader than writer however I know poetry when I see it and feel it. Congratulations on a top level entry in every way. May today be a good day. Excellent....
White Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:36 AM
Hi my friend :) Thank you so much! I am honored.
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October 1, 2017 at 6:00 AM
This is a potent piece Darren. "Let me breathe again"... Am a lil speechless, fave dear xomo
White Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:10 AM
Thanks for the fave, my fiend <3
Jain Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:33 PM
First of all thanks for inspiring me to write more poems secondly your poem is excellent rhetorical devices have added beauty to your poem I am looking forward for more Views From you on my poems thank you again
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:39 PM
Thank you
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September 30, 2017 at 10:34 PM
All so beautiful! "Be my anger when I am kind"such interesting wording. Nicely done, Darren!
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Thanks Kim, I love wording things that way, glad you noticed :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:04 PM
This was quite unique and I really enjoyed the notes at the end to help me understand your poem better. Well done, Darren.
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Thank you Andrea, yeah, I figured I'd need some footnotes :)
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September 30, 2017 at 5:33 PM
I want to be releve-ed! This is very sexy.
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:24 PM
Hah, Dale, yes, I completely agree :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Dance has the ability to express our deepest longings which include every single soul. Your poem reflects this with such surrender and beauty Darren! Thank you for including this very moving and inspirational video also. This poem too shall take its worthy place in my favorites. I simply love it! : )
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:24 PM
Yes, it has. It's very poewerful in expressing emotions.
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Alive with the music...I might retire...the halls are empty here
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:23 PM
Come dance ;)
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September 30, 2017 at 1:59 PM
He was like a stream of tiny silken beads or a flock of larks I was mesmerized by the dance. I could feel my muscles ghostly memories of movement, freedom. Thank you Darren. Then your poem one of your best I think. I felt the yearning, the strain to make things alright, as they were. Straight to my treasure box to read forever.
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:23 PM
He is exactly that. You have described him well., and you elt that yearning too. Good :)
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September 30, 2017 at 1:28 PM
Beautiful, Darren, one of my favorite mediums the art of ballet. I watched the video, he is so limber just perfect with every move he makes and his emotions are just fabulous ...Hugs Eve ~`*
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:22 PM
Thanks so very much Eve. Ohhh, isn't he wonderfuil?
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