Rethinking an old Slogan
An apple a day keeps the doctor away
is an old slogan still believed to this day.
But surely a blunder, at the least a mistake
given a bite of apple the first woman ate
and plunged a promised paradise to doom
turning a garden into an emergency room.
Copyright © Maurice Rigoler | Year Posted 2025
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