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Restless Sea

See the sea so restless and wide
Sailing above it without a peep
Different now..."gurgle, gurgle, gurgle"
As my ship sinks into the deep!

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Poet Destroyer A

November 24, 2011 at 12:31 AM

DANIEL, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR POEM,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Sara Kendrick

January 11, 2011 at 4:10 PM

Interesting work..Comparison to life sometimes calm seas and sometimes shipwreck..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

January 11, 2011 at 11:39 AM

Soup mail in a moment, Daniel.

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 11, 2011 at 7:11 AM

Nice witty thought you have expressed, Good luck in the contest.Daniel

Harry Horsman

January 10, 2011 at 11:56 PM

A new form for me Daniel, enjoyed this, Harry

Poet Destroyer A

January 10, 2011 at 8:04 PM

enjoyed your poem Daniel,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

January 10, 2011 at 7:38 PM

I'm not familiar with this form, Daniel, but I got quite a chuckle reading your poem. (Used to be a boat owner.) Your Soup mail has been returned, my friend. Love, Carolyn