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Restless Sea

See the sea so restless and wide Sailing above it without a peep Different now..."gurgle, gurgle, gurgle" As my ship sinks into the deep!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2011 12:31:00 AM

DANIEL, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR POEM,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2011 4:10:00 PM

Interesting work..Comparison to life sometimes calm seas and sometimes shipwreck..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/11/2011 11:39:00 AM

Soup mail in a moment, Daniel.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/11/2011 7:11:00 AM

Nice witty thought you have expressed, Good luck in the contest.Daniel

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/10/2011 11:56:00 PM

A new form for me Daniel, enjoyed this, Harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2011 8:04:00 PM

enjoyed your poem Daniel,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 7:38:00 PM

I'm not familiar with this form, Daniel, but I got quite a chuckle reading your poem. (Used to be a boat owner.) Your Soup mail has been returned, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/10/2011 7:07:00 PM

A very impressive example of a chastushka poem.

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/10/2011 6:19:00 PM

love it Daniel, good luck in the contest