Response To Rumi

"If you desire healing,
let yourself fall ill
let yourself fall ill."
-  Jalaluddin Rumi

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The more sharp shovels strike, bruise and rip soil asunder, the deeper is the well for life affirming, healing water to fill, swell and remedy all inflicted wounds. The more sticks of a needles' honed, crisp and knife-like point enter as blade through unshaped and raw material, the more it forms into an ultimately wearable garment of refined, sophisticated and confident cloth. The more clay is laid raw to bear and endure the torturous heat of a pottery kiln, the more it becomes complete as timeless, ceramic beauty. And so it is that the deeper we humans fall in need from illness, the more healing can destroy the barriers that block our inner core of soul prescriptions from flowing with truth awareness.
... CayCay December 6, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/27/2016 7:47:00 PM
CayCay, I love the way you wrote this. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/27/2016 2:56:00 PM
Wow... This is just *so good,* CayCay. : )
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Date: 12/26/2016 7:26:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win CayCay. It is wonderful to see you make the short list. This win was so deserving! Have a spectacular New Year! ; ) 7 xxoo
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Date: 12/26/2016 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Interesting poem with some good analogies. Enjoyed.
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Date: 12/26/2016 10:01:00 AM
Nice write! Congrats on your win CayCay! :-)
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Date: 12/26/2016 8:24:00 AM
Excellent examples that prove the theme, CayCay! Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 12/26/2016 7:42:00 AM
Painful images that transform. Congrats, CayCay! Nicely done!
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Date: 12/26/2016 2:00:00 AM
Coming back with congratulations for you :)
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Date: 12/10/2016 11:09:00 AM
I can relate to this CayCay. I finally have a free moment with some quiet time this morning to read. It's been very hectic here. The depth of your words spoke to me in this piece. Beautiful! : ) 7 I adore Rumi.
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Date: 12/9/2016 1:09:00 PM
This is a short intriguing response. If I understand correctly, you use the shovels, bruising and ripping as the 'being ill', and the fill, swell and so on, as 'desired healing'? I like this.
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Date: 12/8/2016 9:52:00 AM
Hi Caycay. This is the first piece of yours I've read and all I can say is WOW! If this is any indication of what awaits them I can't wait to read more.
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Date: 12/7/2016 8:54:00 AM
This short piece was amazing. From the bruising of the land to the healing of inflicted wounds, pain for pain, healing for healing, as the fear is unearthed and reburied. Very cool CayCay
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Date: 12/7/2016 5:08:00 AM
Wow, what an intriguing and sage corroborating response, good luck CayCay!
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Date: 12/7/2016 4:19:00 AM
- Very well written, CayCay !!! - a 7 - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/7/2016 1:16:00 AM
Hi CayCay, This is a good response. It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven :-)Alexis
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Date: 12/7/2016 12:54:00 AM
wow, Caycay, your spiritual nature really helped you do this one. wait till you see the silliness I came up with! btw, Soup is being AWFUL tonight. Is it just me?? I am dying trying to finish slow comments
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Date: 12/6/2016 10:48:00 PM
Excellently worded! CayCay! A most thought provocative piece!
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