Notes About The Poem

Response As Apprehended Driver

Abiding by the rules I comply
Believing they help every gal and guy…
Consider my excuse not a foolish alibi
Duty-bound, to policies I rely...

Efficient and effective driver can’t deny
Following orders does intensify
Great orderliness upon avenues long and high
Hoisting peacefulness midst traffic-caused sigh…

I am so sorry; please forgive my attempt to fly
Just to beat the deadline, verily nigh…
Kindness I ask; “You’re pardoned!” may you reply
Laws to observe and fulfill; never to defy…

My heart seeks conflict-resolution; yes I try 
Now, thanking God’s intervention of prayer* ally...
Optimistically learning lesson on obedience, thereby
Paying fines by the Lord's supply.

ABC and Monorhyme

*1Corinthians 14:40 Let all things be done decently and in order. 
February 12, 2022
4th place, "DMV Poetry" Writing Contest
Sponsored by Matt Caliri; judged on 2/14/2022.
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Y. Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Hi Beata, Congratulations on a well deserved win. Have a nice day-Alexis
Messina Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 1:41 AM
Very clever write, Beata. Congratulations on your placement! Blessings my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Wow Beata, you managed to combine both forms to perfection! Congratulations on your top win! Happy Valentine’s Day! Blessings xxoo
Canerdy Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 9:53 AM
Beata, this is SO good. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Caliri Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 9:19 AM
Great job getting 4th place in my DMV poetry contest!
Baker Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 11:17 PM
Thank you for the lovely, presented poem, Beata. I've experienced many of the feeling you were having as you drove, and also turned to God for protection, peace and forgiveness. I've learned many lessons about patience and being non-judgmental through driving. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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