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'resonance of Rain'

resonance of rain 
an azure sky now darkened…
 
unseen tears roll down



Contest: Dark Rain (haiku)
4th place

lifesadrainrainhaiku

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 11:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fine haiku poem.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/3/2011 8:13:00 PM

Love this wonderful winner, Wilma. Harry

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 6:06:00 AM

Hi Wilma - I liked this haiku alot! Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2011 4:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 1/19/2011 2:23:00 AM

Congrats I see are in order dear poet ! (((((claps))))) And I well understand why ! This is a perfect Haiku Wilma ! Great write ! Have a blessed day ! much love, james

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/18/2011 1:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this lovely Haiku. Caryl

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/17/2011 11:31:00 PM

love this wilma, a deserved winner. Harry

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/17/2011 7:48:00 PM

Many warm congratulations for this super win Wilma.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:16:00 PM

Wilma, I don't recall that I saw this one yet!! wow, you did an amazing job. It seems very haiku-ish. A 7 for this beautiful win. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 2:16:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Wilma

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 12:03:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your well deserved win in Skat's contest with this fine Haiku....:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Wilma! Love, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2011 8:49:00 AM

congratulations,, on your win,, Wilma.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:41:00 AM

Congrats Wilma my friend on your stunning win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy another rise to the top with your great poetry ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Wilma, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2011 3:56:00 AM

Congratulations my dear on a well deserved win.... such a wonderful Haiku you have constructed....with love Michael

Kash Poet

Date: 1/17/2011 2:32:00 AM

Congrats Wilma on your big win with this wonderful Haiku!-kashinath

David Smalling

Date: 1/17/2011 2:02:00 AM

Tears unseen ... rolling down like rain, awesome!

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/17/2011 1:26:00 AM

A beautiful piece, love the use of azure to give colour to the picture painted! Thanks for your welcome comments on 'snowflakes' - good to see you again! Kindest thoguhts, Anna-Marie.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 9:40:00 PM

Well done Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 9:25:00 PM

Congratulations, Wilma !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2011 10:15:00 AM

I hope you have entered this one in the dark rain contest, Wilma. Such an original and vividly painted image in your haiku. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/16/2011 9:06:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Wilma! Best of luck in the contest! So well chosen word. I do love your last line! Al die beste! Hoop jou het 'n goeie tyd! .....Gert :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2011 7:34:00 AM

Sad one for this Sunday morn..Sara