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'resonance of Rain'

resonance of rain 
an azure sky now darkened…
 
unseen tears roll down



Contest: Dark Rain (haiku)
4th place

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Robert Pettit

February 4, 2011 at 11:08 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fine haiku poem.

Harry Horsman

February 3, 2011 at 8:13 PM

Love this wonderful winner, Wilma. Harry

Kory Calhoun

January 24, 2011 at 6:06 AM

Hi Wilma - I liked this haiku alot! Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

Sara Kendrick

January 21, 2011 at 4:46 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

James Peranteau

January 19, 2011 at 2:23 AM

Congrats I see are in order dear poet ! (((((claps))))) And I well understand why ! This is a perfect Haiku Wilma ! Great write ! Have a blessed day ! much love, james

Caryl Muzzey

January 18, 2011 at 1:06 PM

Congratulations on your win with this lovely Haiku. Caryl

Harry Horsman

January 17, 2011 at 11:31 PM

love this wilma, a deserved winner. Harry

Tahera Mannan

January 17, 2011 at 7:48 PM

Many warm congratulations for this super win Wilma.

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:16 PM

Wilma, I don't recall that I saw this one yet!! wow, you did an amazing job. It seems very haiku-ish. A 7 for this beautiful win. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 17, 2011 at 2:16 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Wilma

James Fraser

January 17, 2011 at 12:03 PM

Congrats Wilma on your well deserved win in Skat's contest with this fine Haiku....:)

Audrey Haick

January 17, 2011 at 11:04 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Wilma! Love, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

January 17, 2011 at 8:49 AM

congratulations,, on your win,, Wilma.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2011 at 5:41 AM

Congrats Wilma my friend on your stunning win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy another rise to the top with your great poetry ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 5:33 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Wilma, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

January 17, 2011 at 3:56 AM

Congratulations my dear on a well deserved win.... such a wonderful Haiku you have constructed....with love Michael

Kash Poet

January 17, 2011 at 2:32 AM

Congrats Wilma on your big win with this wonderful Haiku!-kashinath

David Smalling

January 17, 2011 at 2:02 AM

Tears unseen ... rolling down like rain, awesome!

Anna-Marie Docherty

January 17, 2011 at 1:26 AM

A beautiful piece, love the use of azure to give colour to the picture painted! Thanks for your welcome comments on 'snowflakes' - good to see you again! Kindest thoguhts, Anna-Marie.

Joyce Johnson

January 16, 2011 at 9:40 PM

Well done Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Skat A

January 16, 2011 at 9:25 PM

Congratulations, Wilma !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2011 at 10:15 AM

I hope you have entered this one in the dark rain contest, Wilma. Such an original and vividly painted image in your haiku. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

January 16, 2011 at 9:06 AM

Lovely Haiku, Wilma! Best of luck in the contest! So well chosen word. I do love your last line! Al die beste! Hoop jou het 'n goeie tyd! .....Gert :)