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'Resonance of rain'

resonance of rain an azure sky now darkened… unseen tears roll down
Contest: Dark Rain (haiku) 4th place

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Date: 11/25/2021 8:08:00 AM
The Haiku has always been a tough one for me. The Kireji, and the wow moment afterwards doesn't connect in my brain. I understand it when I see it, but doing it is hard. This one is perfectly stated with imagery we all can relate. I'm coming by to check on you lady. Hopefully all is well. Love sent...
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Wilma Neels
Date: 11/29/2021 8:08:00 AM
Thank you for popping in on my side :) blessings
Date: 2/4/2011 11:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine haiku poem.
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Date: 2/3/2011 8:13:00 PM
Love this wonderful winner, Wilma. Harry
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:06:00 AM
Hi Wilma - I liked this haiku alot! Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/19/2011 2:23:00 AM
Congrats I see are in order dear poet ! (((((claps))))) And I well understand why ! This is a perfect Haiku Wilma ! Great write ! Have a blessed day ! much love, james
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Date: 1/18/2011 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely Haiku. Caryl
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:31:00 PM
love this wilma, a deserved winner. Harry
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:48:00 PM
Many warm congratulations for this super win Wilma.
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:16:00 PM
Wilma, I don't recall that I saw this one yet!! wow, you did an amazing job. It seems very haiku-ish. A 7 for this beautiful win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Wilma
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:03:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your well deserved win in Skat's contest with this fine Haiku....:)
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Wilma! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:49:00 AM
congratulations,, on your win,, Wilma.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:41:00 AM
Congrats Wilma my friend on your stunning win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy another rise to the top with your great poetry ...
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Wilma, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations my dear on a well deserved win.... such a wonderful Haiku you have constructed....with love Michael
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:32:00 AM
Congrats Wilma on your big win with this wonderful Haiku!-kashinath
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:02:00 AM
Tears unseen ... rolling down like rain, awesome!
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Date: 1/17/2011 1:26:00 AM
A beautiful piece, love the use of azure to give colour to the picture painted! Thanks for your welcome comments on 'snowflakes' - good to see you again! Kindest thoguhts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:40:00 PM
Well done Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Wilma !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT
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Date: 1/16/2011 10:15:00 AM
I hope you have entered this one in the dark rain contest, Wilma. Such an original and vividly painted image in your haiku. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:06:00 AM
Lovely Haiku, Wilma! Best of luck in the contest! So well chosen word. I do love your last line! Al die beste! Hoop jou het 'n goeie tyd! .....Gert :)
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:34:00 AM
Sad one for this Sunday morn..Sara
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