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Entwined amid the Yuletide briar, the hurried hoards, like lemmings - dart. Within the flames of shopping’s pyre, the smoldered gasps of inner screams. As flurry quells and guests depart, the maze resets - for next year’s dreams. The bloom of every wishful hope, grows wide and shades the thorns of time. Expectant thoughts, with faith elope, and honeymoon with novel zeal. As vestal paths unfold sublime; just watch for fate’s banana peel. Entwined amid the Yuletide briar, the bloom of every wishful hope. ~27 Dec 2015~ 8 syllables per line Cornish Sonnet

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Date: 1/22/2016 11:47:00 PM
DAVID, Congrats on your awesome win. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/16/2016 1:39:00 AM
Wow! Very Beautiful! Congratulations my dear friend! thank you so much for sharing! Hugs, Leonora
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Date: 1/13/2016 10:54:00 AM
wOw!!!! A masterful Cornish Sonnet. I saw it all so clearly. Many congrats of your big win.
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Date: 1/13/2016 6:50:00 AM
Greetings David! Congrats for your top placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/13/2016 6:35:00 AM
Amazing Cornish Sonnets landed upon this list. Congrats on your win. Sara..The use of the old English very unique..
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:28:00 PM
Hi David,, awesome win... :) SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations , David. Loved the bit of whimsy at the end. Great word pairings, too.
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Date: 1/12/2016 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful David., Real poetry Congratulations, SuZ
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:27:00 AM
Lovely sonnet david.. a much deserved great win... big congrats!!
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Date: 1/11/2016 11:38:00 PM
Great work, David, very 'apeeling'. Congratulations! Regards, Viv
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Date: 1/11/2016 5:51:00 PM
Beautifully crafted David many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2016 4:44:00 PM
Lovely and expressive poetry, David! A very deserving top winner. Big congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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