Resolutions

Entwined amid the Yuletide briar,
the hurried hoards, like lemmings - dart. 
Within the flames of shopping’s pyre,  
the smoldered gasps of inner screams.
As flurry quells and guests depart,
the maze resets - for next year’s dreams. 
 
The bloom of every wishful hope,
grows wide and shades the thorns of time. 
Expectant thoughts, with faith elope,
and honeymoon with novel zeal. 
As vestal paths unfold sublime;
just watch for fate’s banana peel.

Entwined amid the Yuletide briar,
the bloom of every wishful hope.

             ~27 Dec 2015~
           8 syllables per line
             Cornish Sonnet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 11:47 PM
DAVID, Congrats on your awesome win. Love ~LINDA~
Gasun Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 1:39 AM
Wow! Very Beautiful! Congratulations my dear friend! thank you so much for sharing! Hugs, Leonora
George   Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:54 AM
wOw!!!! A masterful Cornish Sonnet. I saw it all so clearly. Many congrats of your big win.
Kimathi Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 6:50 AM
Greetings David! Congrats for your top placement in the contest! ;-)
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Amazing Cornish Sonnets landed upon this list. Congrats on your win. Sara..The use of the old English very unique..
A  Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Hi David,, awesome win... :) SKAT
Jerden Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Congratulations , David. Loved the bit of whimsy at the end. Great word pairings, too.
Delaney Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Beautiful David., Real poetry Congratulations, SuZ
A. Sharma Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Lovely sonnet david.. a much deserved great win... big congrats!!
Wigley Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 11:38 PM
Great work, David, very 'apeeling'. Congratulations! Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Beautifully crafted David many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 4:44 PM
Lovely and expressive poetry, David! A very deserving top winner. Big congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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