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Resolution Bittersweet

I ate to many sweets this past year. My sweet tooth is the culprit I fear. Stopping my sweet treats, Will be bittersweet . Resolution this year is unclear. Pull my sweet tooth is what I will do. Which one will I pull, have I a clue? It is my mindset, I need to except, To limit all my sugary chews. For Gwendolen's contest, "Limerick in My Pocket"

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 3/16/2013 2:45:00 PM

Excellent Limerick pair about dietary issues, I face them too, glad to know you're a pet lover, too, Connie.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/17/2013 8:05:00 AM

Thank you Sheri for stopping by and for your comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2013 6:54:00 PM

Ha... love the fun tooth limerick here... I'm a sweet sugar lover... and I crave morning and nights... LOL..thank you for the reminder... he he he..it is time for me to grab a coke and a smile. I already had midday doughnuts :-)... hope you are doing good on the resolution.. xox~PD

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/28/2013 6:50:00 AM

Nope, eating sugar, morning thru night every day. If I had to lose weight or a doctor told me that I'm a diabetic, I'd stop. I had a chocolate protein drink, blended with ice cream, for breakfast. Oh yea, Hershey's chocolate syrup too. Lol, Connie

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/18/2013 7:15:00 PM

I read this one a kazillion times while judging my contest...I really love the angle u took...yeah, just pull that ole sweet tooth! Congrats again! gwendolen

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/19/2013 12:19:00 PM

I just wanted to make it fun, since most of us never stick to our resolutions. I'm already eating my sugary sweets. Thanks Gwendolen for your comment and I hope you had a laugh in your breath each time you read it. Warm Smiles Always, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2013 1:49:00 PM

Cute one..Enjoyed reading the winning work..Congrats..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/18/2013 3:23:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. I had fun writing it. Warm, Smiles Always, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2013 11:21:00 PM

I sure remember this one, Connie. Congrats to you for your win.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/18/2013 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for the congrats. Failed eating sugary treats again. Warm Smiles Always, Connie

Kash Poet

Date: 1/15/2013 10:25:00 AM

Very nice Connie!Congrats on the win.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/15/2013 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Kashmir for your congrats and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2013 8:35:00 AM

Good morning Connie, ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest. xox~pd

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/15/2013 1:14:00 PM

Hi PD thanks for stopping by and congratulating me on the win. Have a great day. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/15/2013 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations Connie love this xx

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/15/2013 1:16:00 PM

Thanks for your congratulations Mandy. Have a great Day. Warm Smiles , Connie

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/15/2013 5:46:00 AM

congrats on your win in the contest!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/15/2013 1:17:00 PM

Thank you for your congrats. I appreciate you stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 1/4/2013 10:08:00 PM

What a fun poem and a great title to go with it. Good luck in the contest.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/5/2013 12:44:00 PM

Thank you Jon. I had a fun time writing it. thank you for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/30/2012 3:48:00 AM

first limmerick, wow, looking forward to more of these wonders.... Happy New Year

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/30/2012 7:56:00 AM

Thanks Harry. Thought I'd start experimenting with different poetry styles. New to writing. It's time to spread my wings. Warm Smiles, Connie

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/29/2012 6:13:00 PM

Clever title, and a sweet piece! Perfect LIMERICK flow and rhyming. Well done Connie!! Best wishes, Keith

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/29/2012 6:34:00 PM

Thank you Keith. This is my first Limerick. Getting the beat was the hardest I think. Happy New Year. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/29/2012 2:14:00 PM

This is a perfect entry into Gwendolen's contest, she will love this! I am enamored by the beauty of this poem, the sheer gorgeousness of it brings a greatness to it! I love sweets as well, and they can be my downfall, but I've learned to eat in moderation...except for the darn holidays, I've gone crazy this past month! Spectacular piece Connie, Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/29/2012 5:44:00 PM

Russell thank you for your wonderful comment. This is the first time I've written a Limerick. I've only been writing poems for 4 months, so whenI receive comments I feel like I have a little talent for poetry writing. I've learned so much at PS. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/29/2012 12:05:00 PM

love it this is fantastic Connie love xx

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/29/2012 5:47:00 PM

Thank you Mandy for your comment. This is my first limerick and I wasn't sure if I did it correctly, a challenge counting the beats. Happy New Years and Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2012 11:32:00 AM

this is sure cute, and dare I say "sweet?" Good luck in the contest, Connie.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/29/2012 6:02:00 PM

Andrea thank you for your sugary sweet comment. Happy New Year. Warm Smiles, Connie