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Requiem for a Lonely Woman

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This poem embodies my childhood memory of an old woman who lived up the road from my grandmother. The timeframe was the late 1950s. The woman's name was unknown, though some speculated that her name was "Grace." She played an old upright piano late at night. Her music echoed hauntingly through the holler. She was treated cruelly by people who didn't know or understand her. They made up stories that she killed her husband and children. Upon reflection, I believe the woman was a victim of misundersanding and loneliness her entire life. 


In the outskirts, where whispers weave through the wind, there stands a farmhouse, its timbers groaning with secrets, a silhouette etched against the horizon’s fading light. Once, it was alive, pulsing with the beat of day-to-day, but now, it’s shrouded in a cloak of solitude, walls lined with the echoes of laughter long gone, rooms filled with the heavy air of stories untold. The woman who lived there, a mystery, a shadow, wandered its halls like a ghost, her presence barely felt but in the gentle ivory caress of piano keys that floated through the night, a sorrowful symphony played to an audience of moon and stars. Folks in town, they gossiped, cruel jests hidden behind closed doors, labeling her a recluse, a witch, a specter of the past, never understanding the weight of loneliness she carried, a burden that bent her shoulders and dulled her eyes. She found peace in her music, notes rising and falling, like the breaths she drew, deep and resonant, a language only she and the night could comprehend. The farmhouse, with its peeling paint and creaking floors, stood as a testament to her existence, its decay mirroring the abandonment she felt, doors no longer opening to welcome guests, windows looking out with a yearning for the world. Inside, the piano waited, its keys now silent, dust gathering like a blanket, a comfort in the stillness, each particle a memory, a moment frozen in time. And so, the house remains, a relic of loneliness, a monument to the misunderstood, its story floating with the wind, carried through the fields, a melody played on the strings of time, eternal, echoing, alone.

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Date: 4/11/2024 7:57:00 AM
People never knew the depth of this woman's pain and suffering for the loses she must have felt of love in her life. She relived her happy times in her music. Playing the piano returned her to those days when she was loved and loved in return. Nothing else mattered to her, certainly not the gossipers who ridiculed, "Grace." Your choice of this picture surely makes her real to those who didn't find her so in your wonderful lines, Don. I value your poetry.
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/11/2024 8:20:00 AM
Lin, thank you for the kind and helpful comments. Truly they are appreciated. Thank you. Cheers, Don
Date: 4/10/2024 4:57:00 PM
such a poignant poem, Don. Your words were descriptive as you painted vivid pictures (the farmhouse). Your poem flowed so smoothly from one verse to the next as you told the old woman's story. This is a gem of a poem with outstanding imagery and a message. The last verse grabbed both my heart and soul. I especially liked: a melody played on the strings of time, eternal, echoing, alone.Am faving this exquisite poem. !!!
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/10/2024 9:39:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much. The poem has roots in my childhood experience of a woman who sadly became the object of others’ inability to understand and accept people who are different. Cheers! Don

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