Republic

these myriad days I've grieved towering loss of freedom once perceived, furtive malignant cancer spreads every citizen intrusive dread... anon denizens of the dark, surreptitious with their spark, do undermine, deceive, and chart a course diverse from heart's inspired constructive bent foundation land twas Heaven sent.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/6/2024 11:31:00 AM

I will be glad to see Feb. 1. It should all be over by then. Prayer is the only answer. God Help Us... Have a blessed day....................

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/7/2024 11:25:00 AM

Thanks, Paula. God is watching His constitutional republic closely. :o))

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/3/2024 8:13:00 PM

True, true, true! ... Somehow, though, my gut tells me that events that 99.9% of us do not foresee will change the current situation most unexpectedly. ~ Carnac, the Magnificent

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/3/2024 9:04:00 PM

I cannot disagree, Carnac. That's why we have elections! :o))

Eve Roper

Date: 9/3/2024 10:50:00 AM

We have to have faith that a normal life will proceed us . Enjoyed reading .

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/3/2024 12:20:00 PM

Indeed, faith is a key....where one's faith is placed remains crucial resolution. Thx, ER. :o))

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/3/2024 5:56:00 AM

Dear Alro, Your poem is so apropos for our country. I agree with you that we should return to God and strengthen our constitutional republic. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/3/2024 8:08:00 AM

USA foundation needs to have the cracks repaired not expanded. Thx 4 visit and comments. Blessed Be. :o))

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/2/2024 6:42:00 PM

Arlo, we do have the potential to save the republic for the next four years, but it does depend on the election results this time. We will see. We can all hope for sanity to prevail and to have people in office who understand what it means to be normal.

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/2/2024 9:29:00 PM

A return to Constitutional Republic principles and God supported governing elements would be a stellar step in a righting of the ship of state. Not certain time is on our side... :0//

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/2/2024 1:53:00 PM

Wish I had some answers. Can't believe the polls...impossible.

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/2/2024 5:00:00 PM

Half the people have answers, nobodies listening! Prayers lifted 24/7.... :o//

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/2/2024 12:23:00 PM

your powerful commentary on the present societal condition slays...awesome, arlo!

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/2/2024 4:58:00 PM

Scared and diligent, Lady. :o))