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REM(Gail's note: This is the sequel to the Email to Subby Conscience poem.) To: gadeb@zzzsmail.com From: Subby Conscience Re: Communication between You and Me Date: February 14, 2012 While I sneak and scheme in your chaotic REM I am doing nothing more than being a friend. Those dream-swirls and ‘mare-tugs purge your mind’s eye so that your psyche can grow and won’t suddenly die. While you’re gripping tightly to antique feelings that won’t budge I’m prying them out; giving them a strong nudge. And as you grudgingly work through a feeling or two I am working my hardest to make you feel what is true. I even may help you work out a solution or two Because during the day you are too busy to. Who else provides perks that allow you to be both young and old in the very same dream? So tell me dear, and answer me this. What would you do if many nights I missed And was sneaking around in another soul’s REM What would your sanity be like then? Without my help to work out thoughts That keep you quite sane… Would you then turn around And try to cast blame? Saying Subby’s absence caused you to act like a drip? Saying Subby’s absence caused your tongue to Freudian slip? Instead your mind can skyrocket and cozily soar After I recede in the A.M. and work behind your mind’s door. Published in PS: It's Still Poetry Volume II

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Date: 2/5/2020 1:24:00 PM
Clever and very much fun to read. Great Sequel!
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Gail Debole
Date: 2/5/2020 1:43:00 PM
Richard, Thank you for reading this sequel! Glad this gave you enjoyment. - Gail
Date: 4/27/2012 10:43:00 AM
congrats on feature for your wonderful poem....Patrick
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Gail Debole
Date: 4/6/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment!
Date: 4/8/2012 6:59:00 AM
Again - You got it sistah. Dream on. love, Kathy
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Gail Debole
Date: 4/6/2017 5:32:00 PM
Hi Kathy, Thanks for your comment. Just catching up on my replies since this feature wasn't available when this was first posted.
Date: 3/7/2012 12:37:00 AM
Gail, I love both these poems about the active role of our dreaming self in working things out for us behind the scenes. Love the "skyrocket and cozily soar." Love Subby's rhetorical questions. You raise consciousness of another part of ourselves we should "see" and appreciate!
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Gail Debole
Date: 4/6/2017 5:31:00 PM
Hi Christy, Thanks for your feedback. The reply function wasn't available when the poem was first posted, so I am just catching up...a few years later...).
Date: 2/18/2012 9:10:00 AM
Nicely done Gail. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Gail Debole
Date: 4/6/2017 5:30:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, Thanks for stopping by. Since the comment reply function wasn't around when the poem was first, I am catching up...a few years later...LOL!

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