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Repentance Again

repentance again old women kneel in pews dotted about the shadowed church black splotches they float among the incense clouds. faces waxen like the flicker candles raised, softened, in the stained glass light. hands tightly curled into each other black rosary beads clutched in woven need black, black, scary black repenting for the world of sin carried in their voluminous souls. timelessness pervades saturday confessions it is all the days and nights of transgressions large and small they roll down the passages of life to be laid at the feet of god well oiled with words of penance. ritual, mea culpa, contrition chanted. scrubbed clean as their kitchens, one by one they arise, genuflect and disappear into secularity.

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Date: 10/14/2017 2:31:00 PM
A highly descriptive piece of verse, Patricia...I have to agree entirely with Freddie's excellent comments below; and yes -- you undoubtedly do have very acute powers of observation - superb poem!! All my very best, Patricia! :) john P.s Hope you are snugly secured and ready for the Winter! :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/14/2017 3:17:00 PM
Thank you John. One of my most favourite things is people watching.
Date: 10/14/2017 5:20:00 AM
I agree w/Maureen ... a deep, thought provoking poem, Patricia. Your elevated spiritual awareness is self-evident in the prose displayed. The last stanza is mind meld infolding, existential unloading. The depth of thought evinced in this poem is spiritually breathtaking. A magnificent poem by a talented poetess. My maiden voyage into your inviting sea of poetry was worth the plunge. Lord willing, I shall peruse your thought writes more. May love light your path always.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/14/2017 3:21:00 PM
It was Saturdays usually after lunch when the Mdonnas would drift in on a cloud of prayer. Most dressed completely in black from head to toe. Thank you for reading and commenting on this poem.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/14/2017 5:21:00 AM
Btw ... great title. Love and more love always.
Date: 10/12/2017 7:43:00 AM
Stunningly beautifully descriptive prodding piece Patricia :) xomo
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 3:42:00 PM
Maureen this is or was a fairly common sight at my church in my youth. I wonder if they are still there in spirit. Thanks for reading and your kind comment.

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