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A bent knee ... Cloaked in black nylon, a briny drop from The smooth cheek, contingent baptism For a closed hand, it's precious cargo, Now consecrated by circumstance and Fate, moments before this it was but The root-stuff of weeds and worms, Now the sacred repository for all words Unsaid, all emotions unspeakable, all Essences of parting. The earthy symbol Of a concluded responsibility, elements Of a soul displaced to the realm obliviate, Gently fetched from the dark mound beside, The loamy results of a somber chasm Gouged from the grass like a war wound, (Six feet deep). Hand trembling, the Digits part and loose their dark cargo, Meager clumps of rich soil tumble their Way to the grave, bouncing into the Somber cleft and clinking with little Thumps on the polished wood vessel Below, it's fine gold appointments glinting Like sprites in the chill of mid-day brilliance. A soft irregular drumming flows up from The foramen as the soil reaches it's Adamantine destination, like the sound His fingers once made on the arm of His favorite chair ... when impatience Surged, or his twinkling eye anticipated The regard of his beloved, her return Gaze the reply to the soft cadence made, Their furtive code to the corporeal Reward to come. Countless such Remembrances, now only JUST that. This gentle thrumming made but sad Sonance, a wordless requiem, final, the Music of life and love shorn of it's sweet Melody, divested and sacrificed to a War half a world away, and a cause And effort made as meaningless now As the words just spoken, and the Tear-stained hand, and the hallowed Dirt set loose ... To it's resting place.

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Date: 5/27/2017 12:06:00 PM
Greg... I am silent, because this poem is excellent in every way possible. It has this sad, respectful tone in it, your language is impeccable as always. And I love your choise of words. I wish I was a native speaker and had that vocabulary in its entirety, I am just a WEE bit envious :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2017 7:35:00 PM
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darren, you are too kind! A large vocabulary is great, but I try not to use "unusual" words for their own sake, but for the sake of rhythm and rhyme and NOT using the same focus words more than one in a piece. I think people who DO use unique or unusual words for the sake of sounding profound or eloquent, often give themselves away, and defeat the purpose by forcing them into places or phrases where they really don't need to be.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2017 7:34:00 PM
I HOPE I have gotten to the point where I'm NOT doing that, but I may just be fooling myself, haha! Really happy you liked this one - I was in a very respectful mood when I wrote this, but wasn't sure I'd done the characters any justice.

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