William Kelii Kekaula Poet Sonnet

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Renascence

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Renascence

Dilapidated bulges bore in vain,
Counterproductive methods confirmed risk,
Drawing boards experienced once again,
Twilight oils burn onward past midnight's brisk.

The regeneration of the dormant,
The sedentary rejuvenated,
Characters clash excellent performant,
Old guards revised and emancipated.

The abandoned surrender willingly,
Causation of being its impetus,
The change serves its purpose meaningfully,
Portal outbreaks fictions of stimulus.

Energies perform on high Pegasus,
Directives laid down eyes regenesis.

2022 November 08
*1st Place*
This or That, Vol 14
~~Edward Ibeh: Judged 2022 November 11

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Lonna Blodgett November 13, 2022 at 6:38 PM What a great performance poem. Your energy definitly performs on high!! Hope you are well and happy dear Poet. Lonna William Kelii Kekaula November 13, 2022 at 6:58 PM My dear, Lonna, I welcome your gracious visit and shared expressions, my friend, with kindest regards, Aloha William

Subimal Sinha-Roy November 11, 2022 at 9:40 PM Congratulations on your win with this great poem. William Kelii Kekaula November 11, 2022 at 9:46 PM A hearty thank you, Subimal, for your kind generosity my friend, Aloha William

Anisha Dutta November 11, 2022 at 9:06 PM BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on your Excellent Poem Concluding lines are fantastic. Blessings always. William Kelii Kekaula November 11, 2022 at 9:12 PM I am pleased with your delightful words, Anisha, you are truly an exceptional friend, Aloha William

Christuraj Alex November 11, 2022 at 7:55 PM A very beautiful poem on Renascence. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula November 11, 2022 at 9:04 PM It's very good of you, Christuraj, the heart is filled with thanks my friend, Aloha William

Miranda Hawley November 11, 2022 at 4:58 PM Congrats on your high win! William Kelii Kekaula November 11, 2022 at 9:01 PM Thank you, Miranda, I appreciate it my friend, Aloha William

Sotto Poet November 11, 2022 at 3:23 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win! William. What lovely poetry you've created, with a very well-stated message. William Kelii Kekaula November 11, 2022 at 8:59 PM Welcoming words, Lasaad, all attributed from the depths of your soul, truly gratifying my friend, Aloha William

I Am Anaya November 11, 2022 at 3:16 PM Congratulations on your winning masterpiece, Hilo Poet! Magically described ~Anaya William Kelii Kekaula November 11, 2022 at 8:55 PM I appreciate your thought-filled expressions, Anaya, thank you my friend, Aloha William

Edward Ibeh November 11, 2022 at 2:31 PM Brilliant sonnet with wonderful imagery and alliteration, William:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest! William Kelii Kekaula November 11, 2022 at 8:52 PM Apologies for my absence, Edward, as I acknowledge your outpouring of courtesies, and the honorable placement, my friend, Aloha William