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Remplir Se Rendre (Complete Surrender)

His voice so firm and yet so tender, beckoning her complete surrender, her defenses slip as he whispers close,"your the one I need the most" Unsure as to his true intent, she resists the calls of his sentiments, still he whispers, draws her in, this lovers chant he then begins "Frêle c'est les coeur Je cherche , cassé amour eu ont son fragile , mon rédiger écho thanksggiving elle vouloir se souvenir de , ça sacerdoce de remplir se rendre " As she felt her spirit move within, so passionatley drawn to him, this spell he cast was so intense, she had to know what he had meant "Tell me what you say to me, those words that chant eternity, I hear your whispers of love so pure, they have me yearning for so much more" "mon cher enfant , mon une véritable amour, I may of been unclear before, there was you see no other way, to say the words I had to say" He took her hand and held her close, and repeated to her the chant he'd spoke "Fragile is the heart I seek, broken love had made her weak, my words echoe that she will remember, this calling of complete surrender" Understanding now his request, she placed her head upon his chest, in words so truthful she was sure he'd see, as she answered "Moi se rendre totalement à thee"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/9/2008 6:04:00 PM
wow Julie this is another exceptional write. You are truly gifted and in French no less . Vous et un fille tre jollie! this write is another masterpiece. I can count ten they I have read all my life I have just read two of your;s you are incredible. olease don't let it go to your head. i will take the time to read and see how many other treasures you have penned. Im impressed I surrender and bow down to you. Thank you for yor insightful comments on my not to compare works of poetry. Michael
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