Remnants of a Rainbow

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces." - John Ruskin  1853

Remnants of a Rainbow

Empty road
Winds the season of afternoon
Through still, anticipating, plains -
Wilderness savannahs -
Chases earth’s ever sloping curve
Lost in time
Under the capricious sun
And jealous wind whirls
Gathering a sachet -
Agate dust in fool’s gold flakes
Crumbs of twigs and freely offered leaves
Regal velvet petals 
Paint brushing
Bits of autumn’s glory
On escaping cerulean fingertips
Fiery dawn’s transcendent warning light -
Cargo on cloud vessels
Sailing into skyports where anxious, trembling, raindrops
Wait
For the eternal rainmaker’s apprentice 
To spin the whirls into a mystical mosaic -
Arching ribbons chasing crashing light and blazing thunder –
Awash with droplets dyed with rainbow hues
In teasing footprints – tantalizing temptation –
Just out of reach
Before the eyes of the road
Until twilight frays the edges
Disperses bits of sunbows on washed out yearning–
Cascades colors to devastated dusty emptiness 
Descends on grey mists - palettes of ambivalence -
Closes doors on dreamy colorless rhapsodies –
Bleached longing -
Chasing bluebirds on remnants of wishful wings.

8-28-20

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/10/2020 2:52:00 AM
Sam, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this wonderful write _Constance
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/12/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thank you Constance. Your wonderful theme provided the opportunity to relive the irony of this experience and remember the wonder we felt driving in a gold colored car at the end of a rainbow!
Date: 9/4/2020 10:39:00 AM
- Right at this moment ... the rainbow is shining outside my window ... magic or coincidence - A beautiful poem, Sam :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/4/2020 11:39:00 AM
Must be magic - not a coincidence in my mind - now a rainbow smiling on both of us! So glad you shared your rainbow - made me smile. Many thanks for your congratulations! rainbow hugs to you!
Date: 9/3/2020 11:44:00 PM
This is vintage Sam poetry and a pleasure to read. Must have been quite an experience to have elicited such awesome musings. I love "Regal velvet petals Paint brushing Bits of autumn’s glory". Well done, friend and congrats on your win ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/4/2020 11:43:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your congrats! Always love to see your words in the line up! It was an amazing experience full of irony although we didn't see any leprechauns trying to enchant us! sending rainbow blessings! Pads are doing well!
Date: 9/2/2020 4:30:00 AM
A rainbow in a desert - how different and how pictutesque - arching ribbons chasing crashing light and blazing thunder - awash with droplets dyed with rainbow hues - a wonderful poem and an awesome experience - a trip that will make memories come to mind for the rest of your lives. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/2/2020 1:10:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, thank you so much for your gracious and lovely words! So happy you got to see this rainbow with me! It was an amazing experience and one that often comes to mind in full irony when rainbows appear. Hope you are well. Did you get to the beach? hugs and prayers...
Date: 8/30/2020 7:50:00 PM
Trails of rainbows so alluring, I like the line 'To spin the whirls into a mystical mosaic' - weaves a timeless spell, best wishes for the contest!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2020 1:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Michelle. I so agree with you! Ever since driving into a desert rainbow, rainbows have been special. They are timeless promises and really do weave a "spell" for those of us who get caught up in their "spell!" Thank you for your thoughtful message and good wishes! In my prayers!
Date: 8/29/2020 1:38:00 PM
i love your choice of words and the alliteration you have placed so beautifully in your poem, sam...
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2020 1:19:00 PM
So happy you love this poem. Thank you so much for your gracious words, ilene! This is based on a true story of following a rainbow through the desert in a gold colored car then ending up IN the end of the rainbow for about thirty miles. The colors were dazzling. What an ironic twist to our road trip! All the best my friend!
Date: 8/29/2020 12:52:00 PM
Hello Sam Kauffman,oh-you paint a lovely scene with your words. These are a remnants of a rainbow. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2020 10:57:00 AM
Hello Sam Kauffman, yes it is fun to read. You enjoyed yourself with this poem. Yes I am doing well thank you. All the best to you. Darlene
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/29/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend! Have often wondered what happens to the colors of a rainbow when it disappears into raindrops. This was a fun "ponder!" Hope you are doing well! All the best!
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