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Reminiscent Heart

There's a flower revival beyond my window pane, Where velvet petals of fragrant rose remains. Spring renewal spurns the colder freeze, And casts love upon a floral breeze. Pixies steal ribbons from a maiden’s room, So her long loose tendrils catch nature’s bloom. A green carpet of grass stretches beneath her feet, While her beau makes her toes curl with kisses so sweet. She pretends the world's a magic wonderland, And fairies sprinkle dust to make love so grand. Ah, for the splendor of this season in time, When the youth feel giddy, but strong in their prime! Oh! I long for those days when I was young, And danced with pixies ’cause Spring had sprung.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/26/2010 11:58:00 AM
I am with you on that thought. nicely penned, you are right on my poem, Baby-after I reread it I could lose the last phrase and not change the poem. Thanks for the idea.
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Date: 1/26/2010 10:01:00 AM
I read this poem of yours today and I enjoyed it Virginia. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2010 4:11:00 AM
Beautifully written sonnet with expressiveness and descriptiveness. Great rhyme and rhythm. Excellent topic. Keep the creative pen flowing. If I have not said so welcome to soup. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:35:00 PM
This is beautiful...Love the fairies sprinkling dust to make love so grand....Marty
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