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Reminiscence

Refraction's slanted sunrise colors your
Eyes, as you fashion and refine the
Mosaic mirrors of your mind
Iridescent icicles of Christmas sleigh rides
Nights by the hearth, wrapped in each other's warmth
Intimate fragrant hush tracing
Springtime's delicate blush
Cloud softened cardigans
Embroided with memories of water lilies
Nostalgia's lakes of slowing ebbing aches
Cushioning the sharp
Empty corners of your heart.

12/03/20

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Sam Kauffman

January 10, 2021 at 10:21 AM

Oh Michelle - how did I miss this gem of color and images! "Mosaic mirrors of your mind," "cloud softened cardigans." Every line is full of amazing phrases! I so love your descriptive, image filled pieces! Congratulations on your fine win! All the best my friend for a wonderful new year!

Linda Alice Fowler

January 1, 2021 at 11:49 AM

Beautifully descriptive and representative of your talent. Happy New Year! Linda

Susan Ashley

December 19, 2020 at 9:51 AM

Dear Michelle, the enchantment of your glowing pen captures my heart's imagination and brings me into the tender beauty of "reminiscence".. sometimes that's all that's left.. The emotion of your imagery is exquisite and metaphorically wondrous. I am ever in awe of the gift of your artistry, my dear friend! warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner

December 21, 2020 at 7:21 PM

I too am uplifted by the warmth of your generous words, and yes the memories are sometimes all you have to get you through the tough times, thank you again for your visit, sending you (virtual) hugs~

John Watt

December 7, 2020 at 1:43 PM

I just love the way you describe the colors of the sunrise with refraction, mosaic mirrors, iridescent icicles and springtime's delicate blush. Then comes the warmth of the hearth and embroidered cardigan. With all the nature references sprinkled in, this set a soothing scene of comfort found in another's arms. A real gem, my artistry sibling, and one I will keep safely in my faves. Enjoy your day ~ John

John Watt

December 8, 2020 at 12:49 PM

Me too! I looked up 'wizened' this week think it meant 'grown wise' and it means old! That would have been a big oops! When I see the word 'refraction', I always think of the Pink Floyd album cover of 'Dark Side of the Moon'!

Michelle Faulkner

December 7, 2020 at 7:08 PM

I looked up the definition of 'refraction' to make sure I understood it correctly (it's funny how often a word I look up doesn't mean what I thought!) Am so glad you enjoyed it, hope you have a warm and cozy Christmas~

Mystic Rose Rose

December 7, 2020 at 4:09 AM

You lost me in the stark beauty of your embroidered water lily vision dear poet friend, thank you for sharing Michelle. May your heart hang on to the memory and make you whole again, xo

Michelle Faulkner

December 7, 2020 at 7:09 PM

This is actually for the 'nostalgia' contest, but am so pleased you liked it, my friend!

Angela Crabtree

December 4, 2020 at 6:10 PM

Your memories are penned well in this piece, Michelle. Hope you have a wonderful weekend :)

Sam Kauffman

December 4, 2020 at 2:14 PM

So beautiful Michelle! Your reminiscences are as gentle as snow falling and light from a star. Somehow my reply to your lovely message about Aurora Dances disappeared. I wanted to thank you for your message. Have seen Aurora only once. Unforgettable. I really hope you get to see this amazing light show my friend. Best wishes for the contest!

Michelle Faulkner

December 7, 2020 at 7:10 PM

Thanks for your kind response, I'm glad you saw my comment on your wonderful poem! Always glad for a visit from you, Sam!