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Just recently I was badly concussed,
With a weapon I never saw thrust;
My wife said to me,
What is on the TV?
Without thinking my answer was dust.

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Date: 8/25/2015 6:00:00 PM
Ha ha the dust was the wrong answer but loved this one. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/31/2015 3:21:00 AM
Hello Phyllis... it was most certainly the wrong answer - Lindsay
Date: 5/21/2015 12:54:00 PM
Great lim. Enjoyed this one very much.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/26/2015 2:45:00 AM
Hello Michael... thanks mate. Its a good one to tell your friends to try with their wives don't you reckon... just don't try it yourself - catch you soon Michael - Lindsay
Date: 5/20/2015 7:36:00 PM
haha, That was a clever reply he gave!! Can't believe I missed one of your recent limerick posts. Let me see if I missed any other recent ones.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/26/2015 2:40:00 AM
G'day Andrea... thanks for commenting Andrea. I'm running low on ideas at the minute, so I better put the thinking cap back on. catch you soon Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 5/17/2015 8:13:00 PM
Another entry to the ever growing list of 'famous last words' :) Nicely done, Lindsay
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/26/2015 2:35:00 AM
G'day David... famous last words! Great... they probably were. Thank you David - Lindsay
Date: 5/16/2015 8:51:00 PM
Really cute Lindsay even if my sympathies lie with the wife. A little dust is a definate must! Your really getting good with the limericks. Diane l.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 11:52:00 PM
Hello Diane... naturally we should all support the wife here. I mean, smart comments from a lazy husband can often lead to long term repercussions, and rightly so - thanks again Diane - Lindsay
Date: 5/15/2015 10:37:00 PM
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ...................too funny,thank you for shared it,I love it. excellent work.......Lol..
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 11:49:00 PM
Hello Afolabi... thanks for reading and leaving a comment Afolabi. I'm pleased that you got a kick out of this limerick - Lindsay
Date: 5/15/2015 6:29:00 PM
lol! very funny! Thank you for the first laughter of my day, Lindsay! A 7. Good morning! :-) Kim
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 11:45:00 PM
Hello Kim... I'm late with a reply, and its afternoon here Kim. I've just finished doing the dusting - catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 5/15/2015 7:56:00 AM
hilarious my friend....sharp wit
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 11:37:00 PM
G'day Tim... sometimes sharp wit and bad timing encourages a blunt object - thanks again Tim - Lindsay
Date: 5/15/2015 7:18:00 AM
Too funny, Lindsay! Love it! Sandra
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 11:35:00 PM
Hello Sandra... I'm pleased that you got a giggle out this piece of silliness - catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 5/15/2015 4:29:00 AM
A very funny one Lindsay-0---talent for humour,indeed-----kind regards----John
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 11:33:00 PM
Hey there John... thanks for reading this bit of nonsense... well, it is nonsense. No husband would ever be game to reply like that, would they - Lindsay
Date: 5/15/2015 1:52:00 AM
ha ha ha love it! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 11:31:00 PM
What are you laughing at Jan... me getting concussed I expect. Thank you once again Jan - Lindsay
Date: 5/14/2015 11:05:00 PM
Hahaha...very humorous. You have a great talent for humor. Love your limericks. Excellent. 7
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:29:00 PM
Thank you Nandita... we all need a bit of humour in our lives, and I'm pleased you get a kick out of my nonsense - catch you soon Nandita - Lindsay
Date: 5/14/2015 9:43:00 PM
You brought a smile to my face tonight but I am keeping an eye on my wife!! 7
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 11:27:00 PM
G'day David... thanks for reading and commenting. Just keep your smile low key - regards - Lindsay
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