Reminder

Just recently I was badly concussed,
With a weapon I never saw thrust;
My wife said to me,
What is on the TV?
Without thinking my answer was dust.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Babcock Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Ha ha the dust was the wrong answer but loved this one. love phyl
Laurie Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 3:21 AM
Hello Phyllis... it was most certainly the wrong answer - Lindsay
Johnson Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 12:54 PM
Great lim. Enjoyed this one very much.
Laurie Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:45 AM
Hello Michael... thanks mate. Its a good one to tell your friends to try with their wives don't you reckon... just don't try it yourself - catch you soon Michael - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:36 PM
haha, That was a clever reply he gave!! Can't believe I missed one of your recent limerick posts. Let me see if I missed any other recent ones.
Laurie Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:40 AM
G'day Andrea... thanks for commenting Andrea. I'm running low on ideas at the minute, so I better put the thinking cap back on. catch you soon Andrea - Lindsay
Brown Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 8:13 PM
Another entry to the ever growing list of 'famous last words' :) Nicely done, Lindsay
Laurie Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:35 AM
G'day David... famous last words! Great... they probably were. Thank you David - Lindsay
Lefebvre Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Really cute Lindsay even if my sympathies lie with the wife. A little dust is a definate must! Your really getting good with the limericks. Diane l.
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Hello Diane... naturally we should all support the wife here. I mean, smart comments from a lazy husband can often lead to long term repercussions, and rightly so - thanks again Diane - Lindsay
Muideen Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ...................too funny,thank you for shared it,I love it. excellent work.......Lol..
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:49 PM
Hello Afolabi... thanks for reading and leaving a comment Afolabi. I'm pleased that you got a kick out of this limerick - Lindsay
Nunez Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 6:29 PM
lol! very funny! Thank you for the first laughter of my day, Lindsay! A 7. Good morning! :-) Kim
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:45 PM
Hello Kim... I'm late with a reply, and its afternoon here Kim. I've just finished doing the dusting - catch you soon - Lindsay
Smith Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 7:56 AM
hilarious my friend....sharp wit
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:37 PM
G'day Tim... sometimes sharp wit and bad timing encourages a blunt object - thanks again Tim - Lindsay
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 7:18 AM
Too funny, Lindsay! Love it! Sandra
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:35 PM
Hello Sandra... I'm pleased that you got a giggle out this piece of silliness - catch you soon - Lindsay
Williams Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 4:29 AM
A very funny one Lindsay-0---talent for humour,indeed-----kind regards----John
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Hey there John... thanks for reading this bit of nonsense... well, it is nonsense. No husband would ever be game to reply like that, would they - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 1:52 AM
ha ha ha love it! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:31 PM
What are you laughing at Jan... me getting concussed I expect. Thank you once again Jan - Lindsay
Das Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 11:05 PM
Hahaha...very humorous. You have a great talent for humor. Love your limericks. Excellent. 7
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:29 PM
Thank you Nandita... we all need a bit of humour in our lives, and I'm pleased you get a kick out of my nonsense - catch you soon Nandita - Lindsay
Meade Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 9:43 PM
You brought a smile to my face tonight but I am keeping an eye on my wife!! 7
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:27 PM
G'day David... thanks for reading and commenting. Just keep your smile low key - regards - Lindsay
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