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Remind Me

I wedge the door upon the night and pray someone will see a light to value my tenacity Remind me who I used to be While winds, confused, pretend to know, with zephyr breath, they exhale rows, of winds to scatter clouds from me Remind me who I used to be A photograph within my heart has faded, pale, and tossed apart Have I been lost upon the breeze? Remind me who I used to be That I might sleep, and never know if who I am, still matters too Not who I was, that once was me Remind me who I used to be
______________________________________________________ HELPLESS, A KYRIELLE ...Sponsors Tim Ryerson and Cyndi MacMillan 5/3/14

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Date: 6/11/2014 2:56:00 PM
Well crafted, intricate and with depth despite its honest, forthcoming simplicity. I listen to ambient music when reading your poetry, as such melodies vibrate in resonance with your words, lending perception and adding a confirming spirit.
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Date: 6/9/2014 9:55:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations, on your win in Cyndi's "HELPLESS, KYRIELLE CONTEST." take care -LINDA-
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Date: 6/6/2014 12:05:00 PM
'A photograph within my heart'... I was hoping and praying that you would enter the contest Carrie and my prayers were answered! Every line is a true gem and the refrain was PERFECT...My interpretation of it is that you are talking to yourself rather than someone else but just in case, I must remind you that you are the best poet on PS and you are BEAUTIFUL inside and out - Tim
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Date: 6/5/2014 2:15:00 AM
Perfect Kyrielle with apt take on the theme, congrats on a fine win, Carrie
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Date: 6/4/2014 11:03:00 PM
Great write Carrie ! sadness coming alive ,, awesome poem ,, congrats on win !
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Date: 6/4/2014 3:41:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem, Carrie; such a haunting sadness ... Congratulations.
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Date: 6/4/2014 3:04:00 PM
Great work Carrie, the flow is seamless. Congrats. BG
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Date: 6/4/2014 2:09:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on the win in our contest. The imagery in this poem is truly haunting, very lovely and moving. You know me, I'm a sucker for great verbs and you have so doozies here... WEDGE... SCATTER.... we were also wowed by the flow of this one... such seamless use of enjambment. Smiles from Cyndi
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Date: 6/4/2014 1:35:00 PM
This is such a good poem, Carrie! Still wondering at the absence of comments here!! Congrats on a deserved win! // paul
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Date: 5/3/2014 12:21:00 PM
Nice.
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