Remembrance

Rows of black with vivid splash of red,
heads bow down at the tolling of the bell
lined up like granite stones that mark the dead,
a silent testament to those who fell.
Thoughts and hearts together march in time,
back to those muddy trenches filled with rain,
one's soul lashed by the whip of every chime,
one's freedom doing penance for their pain.
With faces set, inside we give a cry
as bugle cuts the silence for the lost,
for answer to the simple question why
peace always comes at such a dreadful cost.

The war to end all wars, no lesson learned
as through the Middle East the fires burn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 6:17 PM
Truly, an exceptional sonnet that was a great pleasure to read and marvel at the depth, imagery and sadness revealed in war's hellish furies my friend! Super 10 from me and a new fav...
Wigley Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 1:29 AM
Thanks, Robert, you're very kind. Hope you and yours are well. Regards, Viv
Inman Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Beautiful Viv. Today is Veteran's here.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 12:26 AM
a moving tribute. We have much to be thankful for. Thanks to the brave men and women who's sacrifice so much.
Wigley Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 6:38 AM
Thanks Richard. We must not let them fade into obscurity. Regards, Viv
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November 9, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Gave me chills Viv, we seldom think about the huge sacrifices made in freedom's name.
Wigley Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 11:03 PM
Indeed, paloma. I shall be there in my Market Square this Sunday as usual, for the two minute silence and the sounding of 'The Last Post'. Viv x
Gupta Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 5:01 AM
Surges of spontaneous emotions very well expressed in a nice sonnet ... we can appreciatively relate to ...
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