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Remembering the Long Grass

The long grass,hiding secrets,needles our bare thighs.

In the distance, magisterial, stunning, see a skylark rise.

The coax coax frog-sounds echo in the mist-cloud night

Dare to touch one, grotesque, delicious chilling fright

                                              Our freedom. Freedom.  

Joy gone now in the pain-world.

Our friend-love, once enfranchised, unfurled.

A new life embraced us

A black light ensnared us.

Diagnosis, prognosis, progress non-linear.

I called. They said, not now, maybe later.

Later. They gave you the telephone.	

It was a chilled day and you were home.

We talked, remembered the long grass, laughed.

And that was just four days before you passed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 1:22 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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