Remembering Mrs Sully

Remembering Mrs. Sully always makes my face break out into smiling mode.
Her face was as craggy as a grave, there was an aluminum tooth on the left.
When she smiled, it gleamed with pure happiness, making her stories even better.
When I first met her, her ferocious stories kept my gentle side terrified, for hours.
I thought she was the Hansel and Gretel witch, because she looked like my vision of her.
There was a unique smell around Mrs. Sully, an earthy, vegetable-type smell.
She was always in her garden, killing snakes, big black ones, with large mouths.
She relished showing us how she whacked them with her hoe, hacking them to pieces.
Although short, stooped over and old, she was a force no snake wanted to encounter.
Her stories were full of spit and vim, anger, and devilishly mean murders and such.
If you decided to share a story, she did not hear it, she did not pause if you wanted to talk.
You had to walk along beside her, acting like wearing two or three house dresses
over each other under a pair of overalls was normal, seeing the bibs and lace stick out like crazy.
Her expertise was incessant talking, not waiting for social cues or societal nonsense like that.
She knew about all the hangings that had ever happened in the county, and relished telling
About them in full-force detail, hoping to keep us on our toes, ripe with worry.
All you have to do is mention the words Mrs. Sully, and the old-timers smile, remembering
Those awful hangings, and what happened after the rope was yanked, because we all knew.
Sometimes I swear I see her in her old black hat, pulled down nearly to her eyes,
Stooped carriage, pushing a rusty brown wheelbarrow full of produce, from one farm to another.
We were lucky, our house was smack in the middle, so we would run out and hear the tale of the day.
She owned two properties, a block and a half from each other, one of them had goats.
If we were really lucky, she would have one of her mean goats on a little leash and we could walk our block with it, as it butted us with its angry head.
Rumors said the goats slept in the house with her. It did not matter to me, she was a character
I will never forget her, sometimes picturing that amazing aluminum tooth, which told excellent
Stories.  Stories I do not dare tell my own sweet grandchildren, as they stay up too late already.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/28/2018 10:07:00 PM
"Although short, stooped over and old, she was a force no snake wanted to encounter." I'm sure she was! This was great! I once visited an artist who lived in a huge log cabin with white long shag carpets. He had a nanny goat that they let in the house. They kept a bucket of soapy water and a towel by the back door and the goat would lift its hooves, one at a time, so they could wipe them off before it entered. It was incredible! This was a wonderful tour through the mind of your neighbor.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/29/2018 1:30:00 AM
Just thinking of her again today makes me smile so big; my face is cracking from smiling. She used to TERRIFY us with her stories of the hangings, the tongues hanging out, the _______ ing in the underwear. She had NO filter, and if you are a child, this is INCREDIBLE from an adult. We could not wait to hear her walking up the sidewalk.
Date: 9/28/2018 3:19:00 PM
Oh wow, this is great! I'm not even sure what my favorite part is... so many fun tidbits to choose from! And the part about "acting like wearing two or three house dresses/ over each other under a pair of overalls was normal, seeing the bibs and lace stick out like crazy"- this is so wonderful! It reminds me of where I grew up... I'm not sure if it was living in the middle of nowhere or just getting a certain age & not caring what people thought anymore! ;D
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Date: 9/29/2018 1:28:00 AM
She was her own person, SUCH a character! So much FUN in thinking about her!
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