Remembering

Remembering

My heart was racing and pounding like a drum
It was beating like it had never done
The blood was rushing through my veins
My temperature was soaring with a rage

The feelings were intense as they took a hold
The passion inside was about to explode
The feelings rushed from head to my toes
Is this love or is this lust I so long for your tender touch

Beautiful the desire inside of me
We look at each other and people see the chemistry
Do I dare to touch your face and hold you in a warm embrace?

The fireworks explode when you hold me and
Kiss me through the night, I shiver as our feelings ignite
Passions burning like a light
Like a candle burning bright
This love we have will never die
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Agustin Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 7:33 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on this lovely passionate poem being honored with POTD Julie! xxoo
Dunkley Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Thankyou for your lovely comment. I'm overwhelmed at how many I've received.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Life is all about "Remembering." Have a wonderful day................
Dunkley Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 1:07 PM
Thank you Paula
Messina Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 4:36 AM
Very romantic and beautiful, Julie. Congratulations on POTD! Charlie
Dunkley Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 1:06 PM
Thank you
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Congrats Julie on poem of the day..lovely verses of love.
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 5:34 PM
Thank you
Turner Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations Julie on POTD.
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 5:33 PM
Thank ýou
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 2:52 PM
Sweet for the soul of love, because the lines are actually sweeteners. Congratulations to you Julie on your POTD.
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 5:32 PM
Thank you
Nicole Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 2:04 PM
So beautiful and romantic. Passionate as well. "This love we have will never die" And that is how it should be. Congratulations Julie, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Thank you for your comment
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I was nodding off the other night and these words kept rhyming in my head, so I jotted them down in my book, then the whole poem flooded out.
Kitchin Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations on POTD with your well penned passionate poem!
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Thankyou
Koplin Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:23 AM
The passion inside was about to explode. very strong imagery! The most beautiful thing about being human, being in love and feeling such overwhelming attraction. Congrats on your win!
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:58 PM
Thankyou
Roper Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Love and romance a passion that burns. Nicely done, Julie. Congratulations on POTD
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:53 PM
Thankyou
Warrior Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 7:11 AM
It's nice to remember...Congrats!! on your POTD!! Julie...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:49 PM
Thankyou
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 5:29 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Julie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:49 PM
Thankyou for you comment
Michael Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 4:59 AM
Well done...nice build up and end...Congratulations Julie on POTD
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:30 PM
Thank you again for commenting on my work
Cunningham Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 2:48 AM
We never forget those moments of passion. Congrats on POTD. Tom
Dunkley Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Thank you
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