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I made sound waves with moments of magic to express my compassion through the logic for her to stir with a million other giggles in laughter I dream of an imperfect variety Offer choices with my anonymity for I wish to nourish the comforts of a thought to relinquish I become ubiquitous in nature human flesh intertwined with dew azure she sees then frees the darkness of the night from vacancies I watch the brilliance of a single girl sail past the glory of her given world with homage and courage and the opportunity for privilege If only she can remember to fly while staring into the boundless sky. 7 April 2016

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Date: 7/31/2017 10:48:00 PM
The flow and rhythm is flawless. Nicely done.
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Date: 5/8/2017 9:23:00 PM
A flight of freedom...Congrats on your win Lukas
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/9/2017 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Joseph :)
Date: 5/8/2017 5:04:00 PM
I love the rhythm and the energy of this delightful poem, Lukas !! Congratulations on a well deserved win !!
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/8/2017 6:19:00 PM
Thank you Carrie!
Date: 5/8/2017 11:15:00 AM
Well done Lukas, deserving honors...
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/8/2017 11:43:00 AM
thank you charlie :)
Date: 4/8/2016 7:51:00 AM
Excellent job Lukas. Well written and a great response. Good luck! Peace my friend:)
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 4/11/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thanks Daniel!

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