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Remember November

Remember November, the start of Winter, The slow coming through the cold— Where the pure its celestial gift see A bare, broken essence that is timeless, old. The snow begins its fall after Fall— And white trees bend just slight for warmth, Frozen peaks for miles and miles Through a blistering blizzard storm. The sun splotches in a dozen ways— Ghosts find their haunts in this atmosphere; My heart's breath shows on the uncanny wind— I listen close to the quiet and hear. From once bright and heated days, The frail line of life now so thin; A climate of ice— its only way and path Far into the walk of genesis. Everywhere the birds' song is gone; their loss Leaves a seeming sense of waiting; I'm comforted by silent music in their absence— for Their Nature's current deep still runs in me. Winter makes shadows of the frost This night, melted the fire stones, so tender; Now the graceful sleep it slips upon— Dreams remembered this season in November.

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Date: 11/9/2023 1:12:00 PM
This is a lovely portrayal for that month we are in. I do not like it very much except for Thanksgiving. haha. The snow will be coming soon!
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:45:00 PM
Your poem rhymes and flows very well..an interesting adaption of November..
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Date: 11/7/2023 1:21:00 PM
Well rhymed and very beautiful Paige! Debx
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Date: 11/7/2023 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful and ponderous beginning to your write! … The slow coming through the cold
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Date: 11/5/2023 6:40:00 PM
Nice depiction of November and it's changing days Paige! Loved the "...Dreams remembered..." :)
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Date: 11/5/2023 4:57:00 PM
Paige, your poem is truly exceptional. I was thoroughly captivated by the eloquent portrayal of winter and the anticipation it brings as November approaches. The final stanza, in particular, stands out as a brilliant culmination of your artistic expression.
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Date: 11/5/2023 2:25:00 PM
an exquisite poem, Paige. I delighted in your descriptions about winter and it's impending arrival in November. I particularly liked these lines: My heart's breath shows on the uncanny wind— I listen close to the quiet and hear. Plus I love the warm feeling with which this poem ended. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 11/5/2023 1:03:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning dead paige, the way you’ve painted imagery and written about winter and november and how it is coming your way so well phrased and delivered! I love the flow of your words and depth of every line! And its been a while since iv last read a long poem from you and wow you did it well with exquisite rhymes! Keep shining always! Its always a pleasure reading you
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Date: 11/4/2023 9:12:00 PM
a bold composition overall - what a great final stanza too; had to read this last part over a few times to better appreciate the overall aesthetics, both in meaning and in rythmic quality
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