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Remains (Jared Pickett You'Re Tagged!)

Remains Pulse Taken Living or dead? Fate reveals my destiny Alive! Thanks Ruben Ortellao! Jared Picket your next! Modern Cinquain Based On Word Count....1,2,3,4,1

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Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 9/24/2009 12:13:00 PM

Interesting and so very unique.....The Southern Belle

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/12/2009 7:30:00 PM

Way cool, Jim. Felt like you were working for CSI. I like the approach you took here and you picked a great poet to tag. Let's see what Jared does. Love you, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/12/2009 12:43:00 PM

Nice cinquain James, great ending...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2009 3:36:00 PM

Nicely done. He's alive. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/11/2009 2:52:00 PM

excelent cinquain---Charma:)