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In purple twilight of REM mode where loss of reaction dwells. Inner thoughts corrupt, corrode, peaceful slumber, anxiety swells. Eyes flutter trying to concentrate, directing bodily forces, not there. Focusing thought to force irate confrontation to the obtuse, fare. The scene comes and goes away, we reach within our mind to grab it, clinging, we emerge and sway, between fact and fiction we emit. Stop, let my true dream emerge, Not some farcical, non real jam woven from cognizant thought gurge. Let me spin truth’s web of who I am. ® Sep 04 2010 Charles Henderson Catagory: The dream of self For Constance's "Fragmented Dream" contest

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Date: 9/18/2010 2:39:00 PM
a real more scientic "take" on topic LOVED it! enjoyed muchly! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/11/2010 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Constance ~A Rambling Poet's contest "A Fragmented Dream~~. Love Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:49:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your HM in the Dream contest with this super write.. enjoy a special honor this happy weekend with luv my friend..
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:53:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, Charles
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Date: 9/6/2010 12:49:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, I appreciate the support~~
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Date: 9/4/2010 8:26:00 PM
You have spun well the truth of web of who you are - well penned and expressed, Charles,
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