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Divorced from rules we once held sacrosanct The hunger pangs we felt were eased not stilled We knew their judgments grim and hard embanked Unrisen loaves that left us unfulfilled Yet now our quest so fast and wild pursued Creates a thirst for waters deep and clear And fruit ripe picked must be our soulful food To satisfy a primal longing here But meat too freely taken lacks the salt That flavored and preserved the elders’ bread Let graceful limits come though finding fault With reason we shall meet and make our bed We’ll eat the skin and flesh and want no more While casting out the poisoned apple core

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Date: 11/9/2018 4:59:00 PM
good one
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Date: 11/7/2018 4:58:00 PM
Hi Mark. I've returned to read your poem again. There were so many things that stayed with me, I needed to re-read this. And to place it among my favorites. Again, I say this is beautiful. Deb
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Mark Elam
Date: 11/7/2018 6:49:00 PM
Thank you Deb!
Date: 11/5/2018 5:56:00 PM
There is much to ponder here. In these days of strife and divisiveness, you have touched on some great truths. You have a gift for writing sonnets. Very well done. My best. Deb
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Mark Elam
Date: 11/5/2018 6:36:00 PM
Thank you. This poem took a long time to develop and I’m glad you found it meaningful.
Date: 10/31/2018 10:24:00 AM
Very cool.
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Mark Elam
Date: 10/31/2018 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Maureen!

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