Religion

Divorced from rules we once held sacrosanct
The hunger pangs we felt were eased not stilled
We knew their judgments grim and hard embanked
Unrisen loaves that left us unfulfilled
Yet now our quest so fast and wild pursued
Creates a thirst for waters deep and clear
And fruit ripe picked must be our soulful food
To satisfy a primal longing here
But meat too freely taken lacks the salt
That flavored and preserved the elders’ bread
Let graceful limits come though finding fault
With reason we shall meet and make our bed

We’ll eat the skin and flesh and want no more
While casting out the poisoned apple core
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rose  Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 4:59 PM
good one
Radke Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Hi Mark. I've returned to read your poem again. There were so many things that stayed with me, I needed to re-read this. And to place it among my favorites. Again, I say this is beautiful. Deb
Elam Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you Deb!
Radke Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 5:56 PM
There is much to ponder here. In these days of strife and divisiveness, you have touched on some great truths. You have a gift for writing sonnets. Very well done. My best. Deb
Elam Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Thank you. This poem took a long time to develop and I’m glad you found it meaningful.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Very cool.
Elam Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Thanks Maureen!
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